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9/11/2011 c1 assaasddjeioe
I think this is one of your better ones-the imagery is vivid and intense, and the repetition really ties the piece together. MY CC: I think it might work better if you split it into different stanzas after every repetition of "We'll not live another day in slavery." And, maybe this is just personal preference, but I find centre-aligning poems really distracting.

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