for Incision and Drainage4/25/2017 c1 Guest
Hi! So i read the other story of this and loved it but then I read this one shot and actually liked this storyline more than the other.. I know it would of been harder to write since they both had such big problems. But you said you already wrote another chapter of this so I was wandering if you could release that Even though your wrote this more than 6 years ago.
Hi! So i read the other story of this and loved it but then I read this one shot and actually liked this storyline more than the other.. I know it would of been harder to write since they both had such big problems. But you said you already wrote another chapter of this so I was wandering if you could release that Even though your wrote this more than 6 years ago.
1/4/2012 c1 Saniaaa
only saw this today! i'm glad you decided to change the plot of the story. whilst i really wanted them to get married, i think the first time would have included too many issues without them understanding what effect the separation had on them.
still liked seeing this though.
only saw this today! i'm glad you decided to change the plot of the story. whilst i really wanted them to get married, i think the first time would have included too many issues without them understanding what effect the separation had on them.
still liked seeing this though.
10/9/2011 c1 
132OneLastEndeavor
This was a well-written piece. You've created some dynamic characters here and the fight was very believable. Though, I have to say that it ended quite abruptly...something I didn't expect a one-shot would do. I realize that this is tied to your other story (which I haven't read) but the abrupt ending makes me inclined to think that this can't stand alone, since there's no resolution at the end.
Other than that, it was a good read. It also kind of made me want eggs. Nice job! :)
132OneLastEndeavorThis was a well-written piece. You've created some dynamic characters here and the fight was very believable. Though, I have to say that it ended quite abruptly...something I didn't expect a one-shot would do. I realize that this is tied to your other story (which I haven't read) but the abrupt ending makes me inclined to think that this can't stand alone, since there's no resolution at the end.
Other than that, it was a good read. It also kind of made me want eggs. Nice job! :)
9/13/2011 c1 Kajal
I guess I'm glad you changed the story and had them not get married married the first time around. In the real story, they still have lots of issues to work through, but at least they've both of aware of what those issues are. I feel they are ready to get over the past and their respective insecurities (or will be soon enough), and as bad as their relationship has been so far, their marriage wont be tainted by everything that's happened. By having them not get married the first time around, I think you helped Rey realize she really doesn't want away from Hassan. If she hadn't gotten her independent time, she would not have realized that her issues are her own and running away isn't going to solve them. So like I said, I'm glad you addressed a lot of the issues before they got married married. Of course, now I'm ready for them to have "the talk" and learn how to move on.
On a completely separate note, how odd is it that I found angry Hassan to be a little attractive? It's really only because I know him to be a levelheaded and calm person in general; if he was like this all the time, I'd detest him. Also, he finally acted on what I've been feeling this whole time (though I've been wanting to throw the plates AT Rey...) However, I respect the sometimes frustrated but mostly understanding Hassan from the current PPC better then the one who (apparently attractively) blow up in this one.
I'm sick and so was having the hardest time concentrating in class today. Then I found that this was up and stopped taking notes altogether... It's probably going to make acing my classes a little more challenging, but KEEP POSTINGS! =)))
I guess I'm glad you changed the story and had them not get married married the first time around. In the real story, they still have lots of issues to work through, but at least they've both of aware of what those issues are. I feel they are ready to get over the past and their respective insecurities (or will be soon enough), and as bad as their relationship has been so far, their marriage wont be tainted by everything that's happened. By having them not get married the first time around, I think you helped Rey realize she really doesn't want away from Hassan. If she hadn't gotten her independent time, she would not have realized that her issues are her own and running away isn't going to solve them. So like I said, I'm glad you addressed a lot of the issues before they got married married. Of course, now I'm ready for them to have "the talk" and learn how to move on.
On a completely separate note, how odd is it that I found angry Hassan to be a little attractive? It's really only because I know him to be a levelheaded and calm person in general; if he was like this all the time, I'd detest him. Also, he finally acted on what I've been feeling this whole time (though I've been wanting to throw the plates AT Rey...) However, I respect the sometimes frustrated but mostly understanding Hassan from the current PPC better then the one who (apparently attractively) blow up in this one.
I'm sick and so was having the hardest time concentrating in class today. Then I found that this was up and stopped taking notes altogether... It's probably going to make acing my classes a little more challenging, but KEEP POSTINGS! =)))
9/13/2011 c1 ramenrandomness
Ah I miss the cheeky goofy Hassan, but I guess married life isn't just about fun
Ah I miss the cheeky goofy Hassan, but I guess married life isn't just about fun