
9/18/2011 c1
5thefaultinourpatronus
Oh sweet Rowling.
The structure of this is very well done. I like how the beginning is sweet, carefree, and how it morphs into something so terrible. Really well done.
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Oh sweet Rowling.
The structure of this is very well done. I like how the beginning is sweet, carefree, and how it morphs into something so terrible. Really well done.
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9/14/2011 c4
34DanielStalwart
like the real awkward moment there, that was funny.
but that aside. I read through the other three chapters before this and they all have sort of like a final destination theme. I don't know but this chapter just felt like a fish out of the water to me.

like the real awkward moment there, that was funny.
but that aside. I read through the other three chapters before this and they all have sort of like a final destination theme. I don't know but this chapter just felt like a fish out of the water to me.