7/26/2012 c12 7J.J. LaRoux
Beautiful ending to the story! I'm sad it ended so quickly though, but it was amazing all the same! :D

7/18/2012 c12 1sailorsweetart
Well, dawww, if that wasn't one of the cutest things I've ever read, I don't know what is!

You are very welcome for reading your most wonderful story. It was fantastic! I really enjoyed the 'prophecy' coming true and everything falling into place.

Great job! I'll definetly re-read this one :)

3/5/2012 c1 2Embarrassed
It seems good so far, the cliffhanger at the end definitely serves as a nice hook for readers.

Technical stuff

These are probably redundant, since i'm sure someone has said all of this before, but none-the-less I'll toss my two cents in.

This isn't really technical, but I might toss something else in, besides Judy's tone of voice for the reader to really be able to buy into that she's truly as witchy as Felicity thinks she is, although her job may just be enough to convince us of that by itself :P

[ Considering she had to get up at five thirty in the morning, check to make sure she had everything packed, drive for an hour to airport, have a lecture from her mother about there being strange people in the world, how she could get kidnapped.] This seems like a fragment, but it's a quick fix

Hope to read more soon

-E

2/26/2012 c10 gryff101
I WAS SO HAPPY TO SEE THAT YOU UPLOADED A NEW CHAPTER! I was getting to wonder when you would upload another chapter... I LOVED the chapter! I loved that they went to that wax museum, that is one of the places I want to see in my lifetime! I also thought it was cute when Felicity and Christian went to the fountain in Trafalgar Square. I wanna make wishes like that, and have my wishes come true. :) I hope what Felicity wished for comes true. I want Christian to sweep her off her feet! :D

Update as soon as you can, because this is one of my favorite stories on here! :)

~gryff101

1/11/2012 c9 gryff101
I was so excited to see that a new chapter was uploaded! I was kinda sad as I was reading that Christian wasn't in this chapter. :( I really wanna see what Felicity and Christian are like now since he saved her life. I hope your next chapter has him in it a lot, because in my eyes he is so cute. :)

Update as soon as you can. :)

~gryff101

1/6/2012 c9 1Ashia Blue
WOW! Even though there's no christian-and-felicity-romantic-scene in this chapter, it's still good. =)))

I really laugh at the "Sooooo, do you guys, actually, you know, ride Polar Bears to school?" like, "wow, what a freak" Hohohoh.

Anyway, good job. Update fast. Love it.. ;)

xoxo

Ashia Blue.

12/24/2011 c8 gryff101
I was so glad to see a new chapter was uploaded for this story! I love this story, it is so cute. :) You wrote an excellent chapter. I like how you described the landscape of London. I have never been there, and I wanna go so bad. So thank you. :) OMG Felicity almost died! Thank god that Christian was able to save her!

Upload as soon as you can! :)

~gryff101

12/18/2011 c8 1Ashia Blue
i looovveee it! its exciting and fresh. :)) Keep up the excelent work. Still waiting for the next chapter. ;)

xoxo

Ashia Blue.