for Wolf1/7/2022 c13 marrybeth
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halo author, i am so interested in your work, my name is Marry, an editor for a fast growing platform, i would love to give you an offer, may i know how to reach you professionally?
9/15/2019 c9 PsychosomaticReality
Please tell me Roseath just snagged him up like a baby. Please tell me Tarun didnt hurt her. Please.
Please tell me Roseath just snagged him up like a baby. Please tell me Tarun didnt hurt her. Please.
9/15/2019 c5 PsychosomaticReality
ooo Roseath is so beautiful. Thank you kiyo89. I cant wait to see what Tarun looks like. Also, fuck Sarrfa.
ooo Roseath is so beautiful. Thank you kiyo89. I cant wait to see what Tarun looks like. Also, fuck Sarrfa.
9/15/2019 c4 PsychosomaticReality
Oh my gosh. This is so cute. Its so sweet and I just love this random momther. Also, I have a strange feeling that Camlo's Alpha is not as bad as people tend to think he is.
Oh my gosh. This is so cute. Its so sweet and I just love this random momther. Also, I have a strange feeling that Camlo's Alpha is not as bad as people tend to think he is.
8/22/2018 c13 Marcus
I've never been so disappointed in a story. The synopsis makes it sound like it's a story about Tarun and Camlo but it ended up being just Tarun chasing him the whole time and some kind of animal documentary parody on Camlo's side of the story. And after everything Tarun went through that's how it ends?! Seriously? I don't know why you spent the whole story focusing on side characters no on cares about. What a waste of time.
I've never been so disappointed in a story. The synopsis makes it sound like it's a story about Tarun and Camlo but it ended up being just Tarun chasing him the whole time and some kind of animal documentary parody on Camlo's side of the story. And after everything Tarun went through that's how it ends?! Seriously? I don't know why you spent the whole story focusing on side characters no on cares about. What a waste of time.
11/1/2016 c13 AsiaLisek
even though the ending was abrupt, I still enjoyed reading it.
thanks for sharing,
even though the ending was abrupt, I still enjoyed reading it.
thanks for sharing,
4/12/2015 c13 lostlamb
Umm I'm so confused.I hope there's like a sequel or something. The end is just so sudden. It seems rather incomplete.
Umm I'm so confused.I hope there's like a sequel or something. The end is just so sudden. It seems rather incomplete.
2/23/2015 c13 
1Light15
I'm disappointed at the end as I honestly thought that there would be more of a resolution that and the fact that the language structure and vocabulary were very inciting giving the impression that this tory would have a bit more drama. Otherwise, the first 12 chapters were very good and thoroughly enjoyed.
1Light15I'm disappointed at the end as I honestly thought that there would be more of a resolution that and the fact that the language structure and vocabulary were very inciting giving the impression that this tory would have a bit more drama. Otherwise, the first 12 chapters were very good and thoroughly enjoyed.
2/19/2015 c13 4R. Ficst
It's too bad you had to cut off here, and with such an abrupt ending. I'd love to see an eventual rewrite.
In any case, good luck with any and all future writing endeavours!
4R. FicstIt's too bad you had to cut off here, and with such an abrupt ending. I'd love to see an eventual rewrite.
In any case, good luck with any and all future writing endeavours!
1/5/2015 c12 petrisha.naidoo
I loved it , this is an amazing story , I want to read more , want to see where this goes if camlo accepts tarun as his mate . Please update this story its too interesting to leave us hanging like this . Can't wait for more .
I loved it , this is an amazing story , I want to read more , want to see where this goes if camlo accepts tarun as his mate . Please update this story its too interesting to leave us hanging like this . Can't wait for more .