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2/22/2015 c2 SophieBeaLouise
I really like this! :) Great job! :)
1/8/2014 c4 4Veronica Fay
Hi! I hope that you plan on still continuing this? There's potential for a lot! I liked the idea so far, and I think that he should probably recognize her but if not, then he should remember when she says her name! Good luck :)

-Veronica
8/7/2012 c2 5Don'tStopMeNow
Wow! The way this story sounds makes me feel like mine's almost identical. :( But I'm super happy that you're continuing it, but what's up with that?

You said you were updating, but it's been two months! I want to read more! :)
8/6/2012 c1 Don'tStopMeNow
OH MY GOD! I DIDN'T KNOW YOU WERE WRITING A SPY STORY!

I freaking swear! I was looking at your comment to my story and I thought, hmmm, I wonder if they wrote any stories so I went there and saw this. I hope you don't think I stole your ideas or anything! :( Please don't kill me!
7/22/2012 c4 18Bushwah
Oh, get on it! Post whatever you got no matter how bad you think it is.
7/22/2012 c2 Bushwah
I love this passage:

"Welcome to Watson Boy's Academy. I am Headmaster Curtin and you are?" the man said as he held out a hand towards her.

Alex shook his hand with a good grip which seemed to surprise the man. Did you think she was a shrinking violet? Well, she is here for protection, he probably thought she was emotional distraught or something.

"I am Agent 314 of Sector A in Class 1.5 of Sublevel 4," she answered in the emotionless voice that she had trained to perfect. It was the key to never show your emotions to the outsider whether ally or enemy.

I think this version would pack a little more punch:

"Welcome to Watson Boys' Academy. I am Headmaster Curtin. And you are?" He held out his hand.

Alex shook his hand firmly, which seemed to surprise him. Did Curtin think she was a shrinking violet? Well, she did come here for protection: he probably thought she was jumping at shadows.

"I am Agent 314 of Sector A in Class 1.5 of Sublevel 4," she answered in the emotionless voice that she had trained to perfect.

Brevity. Always brevity.
7/22/2012 c1 Bushwah
It's good. Eight years earlier than what, though? Better to put "Eight years later" at the beginning of the next chapter, or the end of this one if you're lazy xD.
7/11/2012 c4 cindy
HELLL YES the story is being continue. He shouldnt find out, well not after he doubt his sexuality. Just saying.
7/11/2012 c3 moonface
It is such a waste :( it was getting good too :(
6/25/2012 c4 Jasmine
Please continue the story !
6/5/2012 c3 1VivianTheUnicorn
Awh darling, it's a real shame you're giving up on it, I think it's a really great story and you've put some really great writing and ideas into it so far. Maybe you could co write it with someone? Anyway, please PM me when you bring out your next story, because I'd really love to read it!

Viv x
2/28/2012 c3 7melodramatical-bratz
HEY! my fellow Aussie writer! :) saw your review, thought i'd drop you a line. :) the best cliches are always the ones where the girls get enrolled into an all boys school innit? dont i just love it? hahah... just a quick suggestion, i dont think you should drop this story, it has great potential! oh god, reading my different shades of purple and facades reminded me what a young writer i was. all the mistakes... ._. lol... i need to edit that story again. but... how about them being in a class and that the two of them being two best at body combat or something... *wink* teehee... and then they've dubbed each other arch rivals? and he finds out who she is on a mission? just a run off the page suggestion. :) holler at me anytime. :) email me or something. :) maybe we can collaborate on something. :) xoxo
2/15/2012 c3 1Craving Oxygen
I want to cry. That is very depressing. I was so exited when I saw you had another chapter up.But I understand as I have so many stories that I have only got up to the third chapter on. I can't wait to read your next chapter though.

xxx

(he could be the 1) now Craving Oxygen
2/15/2012 c3 3TO-OLazyToLogin
Awwh, that's a shame. I liked this story. And there's a lot of things you could have done with this.
2/14/2012 c3 22my poor toaster
Aww! Sadness! ;( if you ever decide to start this up again, I'm right here!
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