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10/3/2011 c1 51instant bliss
You make good use of the sonnet form. The rhythm is great, and that's not easy!

The title of this piece caught my attention. I've never heard a graveyard called a "necropolis" before. It's really very morbid to think of, a "city of the dead", and I think this poem does a great job of showing the oddness of that turn of phrase. I particularly liked the notion of the dead being rude hosts, ignoring their guests.

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