for White Carnations3/5/2021 c32 Liane Kennedy
Great Story! Really enjoyed it.
Great Story! Really enjoyed it.
3/24/2015 c3 BookFreak147
Looks and sounds so much like a bollywood luv story :)
Amazing plot,I really luv it !
You are really gud at putting your imagination I'm word
Looks and sounds so much like a bollywood luv story :)
Amazing plot,I really luv it !
You are really gud at putting your imagination I'm word
8/10/2012 c32 Guest
That is one of the sweetest stories I ever read
That is one of the sweetest stories I ever read
1/31/2012 c32 
35Kain Delo
Hey... there Ritu... I read this story last year on Fanfiction... It's STILL CUTE...
35Kain DeloHey... there Ritu... I read this story last year on Fanfiction... It's STILL CUTE...
12/21/2011 c32 2Roflmao101
Brillant story! When I started it I couldn't stop. I had a lot of water works in this. It was truly a heart warmer great story before Christmas. If you're going to continue write a sequel to this then please do (Will it be Kaia's turn to fall in love? **nudge nudge**), I can't wait to read it!
The name I thought was Blue Daisies. I hope this helps!
-Roflmao101
2Roflmao101Brillant story! When I started it I couldn't stop. I had a lot of water works in this. It was truly a heart warmer great story before Christmas. If you're going to continue write a sequel to this then please do (Will it be Kaia's turn to fall in love? **nudge nudge**), I can't wait to read it!
The name I thought was Blue Daisies. I hope this helps!
-Roflmao101
12/18/2011 c32 Princess97
EPILOGUE! What? I was preparing my self for the end after atleast two more chapters. Really sweet ending though. I'll miss it a lot. :'(
EPILOGUE! What? I was preparing my self for the end after atleast two more chapters. Really sweet ending though. I'll miss it a lot. :'(
12/18/2011 c32 Katie
Very nicely done. I loved to read your story and the timely updates. I'll look forward to your next one.
Very nicely done. I loved to read your story and the timely updates. I'll look forward to your next one.
12/18/2011 c32 1leavesfallingup
Very few men would be happy to have a photo wife's previous wedding prominently displayed. It speaks volumes about Damon: as Pierre's friend. As Mia's second love. And as the man...
...who fell in love with Mia even when he knew that he shouldn't, then suffered in silence and self-enforced isolation for years, and who finally laid his heart on the line to help Mia after she lost her first husband. By keeping Pierre prominent in both of their hearts and minds he honored his friend and allowed Mia's heart to open again.
This was a very well-written and beautiful story. I hope that you will write more long stories in the future.
BTW, I am the Footsore Storyteller (an old account that I accidentally logged into when I reviewed last chapter. Sorry for the confusion)
1leavesfallingupVery few men would be happy to have a photo wife's previous wedding prominently displayed. It speaks volumes about Damon: as Pierre's friend. As Mia's second love. And as the man...
...who fell in love with Mia even when he knew that he shouldn't, then suffered in silence and self-enforced isolation for years, and who finally laid his heart on the line to help Mia after she lost her first husband. By keeping Pierre prominent in both of their hearts and minds he honored his friend and allowed Mia's heart to open again.
This was a very well-written and beautiful story. I hope that you will write more long stories in the future.
BTW, I am the Footsore Storyteller (an old account that I accidentally logged into when I reviewed last chapter. Sorry for the confusion)
12/18/2011 c32 1starlight91
It ended...aww :( But it was a great story and I loved it! It was definitely a great experience for me as a reader. I enjoyed the story as much as you enjoyed writing it. You did an awesome job, overall, and I can't wait to read your next story :D
1starlight91It ended...aww :( But it was a great story and I loved it! It was definitely a great experience for me as a reader. I enjoyed the story as much as you enjoyed writing it. You did an awesome job, overall, and I can't wait to read your next story :D
12/18/2011 c32 Oboe Jenkins
I approve!
I approve!
12/18/2011 c32 Thesmartygirl
Damn! Now I'm crying. This is a wonderful story and best Christmas present ever! Thanks for a heartwarming, happy ending TvT
Damn! Now I'm crying. This is a wonderful story and best Christmas present ever! Thanks for a heartwarming, happy ending TvT
12/16/2011 c31 The Footsore Storyteller
The proposal was nice. It would have been better if all of that smoke from the candles hadn't set off the fire-suppression system, which triggered the water sprinklers and doused every room in the building... it is probably a good thing that you didn't include that in your story... (the lawyers are still working on the compensation package and have instructed Damon to remain silent on the issue)
And now it is official. They didn't waste any time letting the world know, which is good. Everyone was probably already talking about them anyway.
The proposal was nice. It would have been better if all of that smoke from the candles hadn't set off the fire-suppression system, which triggered the water sprinklers and doused every room in the building... it is probably a good thing that you didn't include that in your story... (the lawyers are still working on the compensation package and have instructed Damon to remain silent on the issue)
And now it is official. They didn't waste any time letting the world know, which is good. Everyone was probably already talking about them anyway.
12/16/2011 c31 Thesmartygirl
OMG! I'm soooo happy for them! My lips are almost bleeding right now coz Damon is nervous as I am. Phew! I thought Mia might say 'no', that's a relief!
I feel so bad though, 2 or 3 chapters left :'(
I hope Damon's family accept them.
Thanks for the update :)
OMG! I'm soooo happy for them! My lips are almost bleeding right now coz Damon is nervous as I am. Phew! I thought Mia might say 'no', that's a relief!
I feel so bad though, 2 or 3 chapters left :'(
I hope Damon's family accept them.
Thanks for the update :)
12/16/2011 c31 Princess97
Lol.. completing the fall... I would've loved a little insider on Breena and Alex
Lol.. completing the fall... I would've loved a little insider on Breena and Alex