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8/20/2012 c1 2FromMeToYouOnYourBirthday
Just like your other story- warm and beautiful yet distant like an outsider looking in, yet the detail is so that it has to be so connected to you. Wonderful.
7/6/2012 c1 21rosieroo
Belinda! Congratulations on getting this little gem onto ADoR! You are such a talented writer. I don't think I've ever read a story in second person (other than those weird horror books I used to read when younger) and I think you did a magnificent job with it! I like how you didn't give away anything at the beginning and that the reader had to read a bit between the lines to fully understand. This is definitely a unique one shot!
10/5/2011 c1 14Wtf-Are-Scrambled-Eggs
Very good - the language is very beautiful. I didn't realize he was deaf until she asked if he could lip read; was it mentioned earlier? Nice ending, too0 . Bittersweet. Well done. It's been added to my Challenge archive :) first one, woop!
10/5/2011 c1 12fictionsymphony
I really enjoyed this. Great job. :)

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