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11/8/2011 c1 SnoQueen
Hm. Was quite confused by this one. I thought she'd explain what she meant every time she'd want to confess her loneliness, but it was vague.

I didn't quite understand their relationship either...are they friends? Where did they meet? etc.

But it was well written - you expressed her emotions very well; I just had trouble understanding the underlying meaning of them.


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