for What I wish4/8/2012 c1 
46SwimmingThroughExistance
this has me hyperventilating... WTH cant this ever happen in real life?lol... good story, one of my favourites cos i relate:D
46SwimmingThroughExistancethis has me hyperventilating... WTH cant this ever happen in real life?lol... good story, one of my favourites cos i relate:D
3/13/2012 c1 HNiji
OMG ARE YOU SOME TYPE OF MIND READER? I was having that same fantasy! Surprise, flowers and all!
OMG ARE YOU SOME TYPE OF MIND READER? I was having that same fantasy! Surprise, flowers and all!
10/15/2011 c1 23jennah3tears
I really enjoyed this. There were a few typo's, but nothing major. It's very cute and romantical!
23jennah3tearsI really enjoyed this. There were a few typo's, but nothing major. It's very cute and romantical!
10/14/2011 c1 Violet-Revenge
Completely my type of story :)
I love how it all worked out perfectly, even the flowers :)
And how you described their past within it, like the crooked nose and everything :)
Loved it :)
Completely my type of story :)
I love how it all worked out perfectly, even the flowers :)
And how you described their past within it, like the crooked nose and everything :)
Loved it :)
10/13/2011 c1 32InfinityChaos
Well, that was sweet.
I liked it a lot.
It was just short enough, but not too long.
The guy you described kinda reminds me of my ex, oddly enough.
But, the story brought a smile to my face.
I was planning to check it out in the morning, but I clicked on it then read one sentence, then just read all of it. Hah,
Good job, I liked it(:
It's got that, deeper feeling that I wanted in my story, but just recently going through a break up, I didn't really have it in me to write feeling like that, but this I liked.
And I've now said that, three times?
Well yeah, I'll hush now, and tomorrow, I'll read the rest of your things, I like your style.
~Vanity;
32InfinityChaosWell, that was sweet.
I liked it a lot.
It was just short enough, but not too long.
The guy you described kinda reminds me of my ex, oddly enough.
But, the story brought a smile to my face.
I was planning to check it out in the morning, but I clicked on it then read one sentence, then just read all of it. Hah,
Good job, I liked it(:
It's got that, deeper feeling that I wanted in my story, but just recently going through a break up, I didn't really have it in me to write feeling like that, but this I liked.
And I've now said that, three times?
Well yeah, I'll hush now, and tomorrow, I'll read the rest of your things, I like your style.
~Vanity;
10/13/2011 c1 5FreedomofWriting
aww a happy ending. This was quite a sweet story. I think we all have those moments where we imagine what we'd like to have happen only for something else to take place, usually the dream is nicer though. I'm glad in this case it worked out for her though.
It was sweet and well written.
There was one sentences I read a few times trying to figure out how exactly you meant it:
Then I'd go on to say how I've loved you for a long time but it wasn't until you weren't there sharing every moment with me that I realized I wanted you to be.
I guess it's meant to refer to him wanting her to be there every moment? but it's a bit unclear what he wants her to be.
Also I've noticed a few missing commas here and there. In the above one there should a comma before sharing for example. There were a few occasions like that through out the story.
Other than that well written!
5FreedomofWritingaww a happy ending. This was quite a sweet story. I think we all have those moments where we imagine what we'd like to have happen only for something else to take place, usually the dream is nicer though. I'm glad in this case it worked out for her though.
It was sweet and well written.
There was one sentences I read a few times trying to figure out how exactly you meant it:
Then I'd go on to say how I've loved you for a long time but it wasn't until you weren't there sharing every moment with me that I realized I wanted you to be.
I guess it's meant to refer to him wanting her to be there every moment? but it's a bit unclear what he wants her to be.
Also I've noticed a few missing commas here and there. In the above one there should a comma before sharing for example. There were a few occasions like that through out the story.
Other than that well written!
10/12/2011 c1 8recklessly abandoned
I really liked this story. I thought is was super sweet and I could totally connect with the main character when she was talking about her childhood friend. I also thought it was cool how the beginning was kind of like a story within a story. I'm glad your character got her happy ending 8D *thumbs up*
8recklessly abandonedI really liked this story. I thought is was super sweet and I could totally connect with the main character when she was talking about her childhood friend. I also thought it was cool how the beginning was kind of like a story within a story. I'm glad your character got her happy ending 8D *thumbs up*