for Inheritance The Heir5/29/2013 c1 
336TheGlycoprotein
I loved the imagery and meaning behind this, as well as the literal interpretation. Nice work :)
336TheGlycoproteinI loved the imagery and meaning behind this, as well as the literal interpretation. Nice work :)
10/10/2011 c1 60AppleCrumble
Another great poem! :-D I really loved it, it created a really vivid image :-)
60AppleCrumbleAnother great poem! :-D I really loved it, it created a really vivid image :-)
10/10/2011 c1 131Mylilblackpen
I like the pace of this poem and I think its very clever how its set out. Seems intriguing because we know he is an heir to a throne but where is this land he is to rule over? I really liked it :)
Thank you for reading my poem, thought I would repay the kind favour :)
131MylilblackpenI like the pace of this poem and I think its very clever how its set out. Seems intriguing because we know he is an heir to a throne but where is this land he is to rule over? I really liked it :)
Thank you for reading my poem, thought I would repay the kind favour :)