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5/24/2014 c1 81Princess-anna57
Beautiful, just lovely! Keep writing!

Anna
3/5/2014 c1 7ImmanenceEnsured
I like all four lines of this poem, plus the title!
12/31/2011 c1 8Dark Blue Lover
Love this, simple but effective. There's real beauty in how you relate the colours to the sea. Great job!
10/11/2011 c1 131Mylilblackpen
You'd think with 4 lines a poem, especially one about the sea, wouldn't work but it does because its so simple yet the way you relate the colours to items like seashells or the boat!

Fantastic job and I think well executed! I love the simplicity and I think when I go on a boat, I'll remember this :)
10/9/2011 c1 9DoReMe22
So much beauty in only four lines. I truly admire your skill in simplicity
10/8/2011 c1 60AppleCrumble
This is so sweet. I really love the way you use colors to distinguish the sea!

Great job :-D

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