for To Simply Put It10/9/2011 c1 
3Miss-You-Too
I think it was pretty good, save for a few sentences that confused because of the way it was worded (like the way you explained her deformity...it was confusing in the first couple sentences) but other than that its pretty good! I also have a baby tooth that never came out and i dont think its that obvious so its doesnt really bother me lol i wonder if someone can really have a problem like hers, though its only one tooth for me i never heard of a whole row of teeth. Thats definately interesting. Anyway this is your first chapter so no you didnt blab too much, it was enough info and it didnt bore me so...i think i said everything i want to say so update soon!
3Miss-You-TooI think it was pretty good, save for a few sentences that confused because of the way it was worded (like the way you explained her deformity...it was confusing in the first couple sentences) but other than that its pretty good! I also have a baby tooth that never came out and i dont think its that obvious so its doesnt really bother me lol i wonder if someone can really have a problem like hers, though its only one tooth for me i never heard of a whole row of teeth. Thats definately interesting. Anyway this is your first chapter so no you didnt blab too much, it was enough info and it didnt bore me so...i think i said everything i want to say so update soon!