for Evangeline7/25/2017 c19 Lil Raven
OMG this story was so amazing the ending was so sad tho
OMG this story was so amazing the ending was so sad tho
11/2/2013 c19 Red
While this was incredible written, some parts weren't realistic. Those who listened to Leslie and what she had to say wild realistically look into Angie for signs of sociopathy and psychopathy. DNA proof could've been gotten from the things she gathered. While these small holes bothered me, I still enjoyed the story.
While this was incredible written, some parts weren't realistic. Those who listened to Leslie and what she had to say wild realistically look into Angie for signs of sociopathy and psychopathy. DNA proof could've been gotten from the things she gathered. While these small holes bothered me, I still enjoyed the story.
1/26/2012 c19 Jazziet
Wow. That was absolutely amazing even if the ending was sad and bitter. I swear reading this I just wanted to reach into the pages and punch Evangeline in the throat repeatedly. Great story.
Wow. That was absolutely amazing even if the ending was sad and bitter. I swear reading this I just wanted to reach into the pages and punch Evangeline in the throat repeatedly. Great story.
1/19/2012 c19 
1xXPoEtRyMoUtHXx
Oh. My. God.
AWESOME!
DISTURBING!
HOLY CRAP this was good. I read the whole thing in only two sittings. You should write a sequel.
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1xXPoEtRyMoUtHXxOh. My. God.
AWESOME!
DISTURBING!
HOLY CRAP this was good. I read the whole thing in only two sittings. You should write a sequel.
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12/18/2011 c19 theadventuresofkyasi
I loved this story very much. Just, I think Leslie should have just taken her daughter away from Evangeline, she should have left. I understand there were reasons, but oh. I still read every word of this story, and loved it. :)
I loved this story very much. Just, I think Leslie should have just taken her daughter away from Evangeline, she should have left. I understand there were reasons, but oh. I still read every word of this story, and loved it. :)
11/24/2011 c19 TheShiftingMonkey
Oh snap! This has got to be one of the most disturbing stories I've ever read. Excellent work!
Oh snap! This has got to be one of the most disturbing stories I've ever read. Excellent work!
11/4/2011 c7 Lupo669
Angie seems smarter than her mom at this point. Les should have called the child anyway and asked, lol...
Angie seems smarter than her mom at this point. Les should have called the child anyway and asked, lol...
11/4/2011 c6 Lupo669
Leslie is sounding a little paranoid, lol. I wonder if she has a history of being dramatic?
Leslie is sounding a little paranoid, lol. I wonder if she has a history of being dramatic?
11/3/2011 c3 Lupo669
It's always in the little clues, the things noticed and quickly forgotten or misinterpreted...isn't it? Lol...
Nice chapter!
It's always in the little clues, the things noticed and quickly forgotten or misinterpreted...isn't it? Lol...
Nice chapter!
11/3/2011 c2 Lupo669
"it was all my imagination." Dum, Dum,da...lol.
I wonder what exactly was being whispered? And even though Evangeline was smiling, was Audrey?
Thanks for writing...
"it was all my imagination." Dum, Dum,da...lol.
I wonder what exactly was being whispered? And even though Evangeline was smiling, was Audrey?
Thanks for writing...
10/25/2011 c1 Lupo669
Okay... The moms self doubt and guilt from suspicions comes across very well. She acknowledges all the alternate explanations for whatever is bugging her. Very nice start...
Okay... The moms self doubt and guilt from suspicions comes across very well. She acknowledges all the alternate explanations for whatever is bugging her. Very nice start...