for Evangeline10/23/2011 c14 Alberichi
She has to act now. She can't do nothing and see everything around her being destroyed by her little demon.
It's too awful to be in her situation. To have a daughter that does not love you one bit and abuses her sibling.
This is a great story! Too bad that I am already reading the last chapter available :(
Hopefully, this means I am going to read about another original idea :)
She has to act now. She can't do nothing and see everything around her being destroyed by her little demon.
It's too awful to be in her situation. To have a daughter that does not love you one bit and abuses her sibling.
This is a great story! Too bad that I am already reading the last chapter available :(
Hopefully, this means I am going to read about another original idea :)
10/23/2011 c13 Alberichi
Did she actually say that she did not want to learn the truth? Did she?
If I were there, I would have kicked some sense into her! her daughter is suffering and she thinks about the safety of her little world so that she won't have to face a so called "failure"! What a mother indeed!
Although, that reaction is expected. sad to say.
Did she actually say that she did not want to learn the truth? Did she?
If I were there, I would have kicked some sense into her! her daughter is suffering and she thinks about the safety of her little world so that she won't have to face a so called "failure"! What a mother indeed!
Although, that reaction is expected. sad to say.
10/23/2011 c10 Alberichi
hmm, unfortunately for her, she DOES sound like she's jalous of her own daughetr. I mean, she's right about her, but even I would not believe her in those circumstances. *sigh* That was funny xD
hmm, unfortunately for her, she DOES sound like she's jalous of her own daughetr. I mean, she's right about her, but even I would not believe her in those circumstances. *sigh* That was funny xD
10/23/2011 c8 Alberichi
The way you build slowly the suspicion and events is awesome.
I can't help but be awed by the situation.
The mother has the power between her hands. She's the adult, the one who can punish or forgive, the one dictating the laws. Yet, she finds herself powerless against a nine year old girl. Not only this, but she also is unable to protect her other child.
I am sure she will soon be consumed by guilt when she discovers the truth. And her man, that absent idiot, huh.
The way you build slowly the suspicion and events is awesome.
I can't help but be awed by the situation.
The mother has the power between her hands. She's the adult, the one who can punish or forgive, the one dictating the laws. Yet, she finds herself powerless against a nine year old girl. Not only this, but she also is unable to protect her other child.
I am sure she will soon be consumed by guilt when she discovers the truth. And her man, that absent idiot, huh.
10/19/2011 c14 Einsamkeit
You have me anticipating the next chapter like crazy! Surely a sign of an amazing writer.
You have me anticipating the next chapter like crazy! Surely a sign of an amazing writer.
10/19/2011 c4 Alberichi
This mother is lucky. She's not as unsuspecting as others can be.
But still, she refuses to see reality or imagine the diffent scenarii.
Ugh, her husband is such a lazy useless thing! Makes me want to shake some energy into him!
This mother is lucky. She's not as unsuspecting as others can be.
But still, she refuses to see reality or imagine the diffent scenarii.
Ugh, her husband is such a lazy useless thing! Makes me want to shake some energy into him!
10/19/2011 c3 Alberichi
Awesome!
I noticed that you liked girls, and liked to write about sisters. Something I would not mind, because I like your writings.
I don't even want to think about what this chapter is implying! But it is horror, is it not?
Awesome!
I noticed that you liked girls, and liked to write about sisters. Something I would not mind, because I like your writings.
I don't even want to think about what this chapter is implying! But it is horror, is it not?
10/19/2011 c2 Alberichi
This looks real. That's what I like about your writing, it always have that authentic feeling. You can accurantely predict natural reflexes and thoughts.
The fact that the mother feels silly makes me imagine what she would write once she finds out about the truth. I am so looking forward to that.
This looks real. That's what I like about your writing, it always have that authentic feeling. You can accurantely predict natural reflexes and thoughts.
The fact that the mother feels silly makes me imagine what she would write once she finds out about the truth. I am so looking forward to that.
10/19/2011 c1 Alberichi
I would not have imagined a story where the enemy is a nine year old girl. That's a fascinating prospect, especially that the mother seems somehow far from reality and that we kind of feel like we are the diary she's writing on.
I loved the part where you described the girl when behaving with her dad. The eyelids had a strong effect on me. Now, I find her completely fascinating!
I would not have imagined a story where the enemy is a nine year old girl. That's a fascinating prospect, especially that the mother seems somehow far from reality and that we kind of feel like we are the diary she's writing on.
I loved the part where you described the girl when behaving with her dad. The eyelids had a strong effect on me. Now, I find her completely fascinating!
210/18/2011 c12 bunnyluver225
I think i skipped a chapter but it's still awesome!
im not getting off the computer till im done!
I think i skipped a chapter but it's still awesome!
im not getting off the computer till im done!