
11/2/2011 c2 Shocking Pink
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SHAYDEN, MY LOVE~~~~~~~~
I really like this guy as well! ^ ^
Please keep writing, Cloudy, I really like it!
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SHAYDEN, MY LOVE~~~~~~~~
I really like this guy as well! ^ ^
Please keep writing, Cloudy, I really like it!
10/14/2011 c1 Shocking Pink
ZLOJWEMOGIKLAJMXIO#RNM#IXKLTNQIOTI:[email protected]
I love this~
Great job!
Keep writing!
(P.S. its Madi~ XDD)
ZLOJWEMOGIKLAJMXIO#RNM#IXKLTNQIOTI:[email protected]
I love this~
Great job!
Keep writing!
(P.S. its Madi~ XDD)
10/13/2011 c1
6turquoisehalle0
This is really good! I only found one mistake I believe that should be fixed. I actually can't find it now that I am going back and looking at it, but it is in the first half of the chapter. I really like it! It is quite interesting! Keep up the excellent work!

This is really good! I only found one mistake I believe that should be fixed. I actually can't find it now that I am going back and looking at it, but it is in the first half of the chapter. I really like it! It is quite interesting! Keep up the excellent work!