for Shadows and Spotlights5/20/2012 c2 Cordelia Gallo
You use however a bit too much, so try and add variety. But it's a really good start and I'm looking forward to the next chapter. :]
You use however a bit too much, so try and add variety. But it's a really good start and I'm looking forward to the next chapter. :]
5/20/2012 c2 N.S. Fiala
Oh, I like this! And I have a feeling she's a girlfriend. Please upload soon!
Oh, I like this! And I have a feeling she's a girlfriend. Please upload soon!
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