for Tenacious Contingency8/13/2017 c1 Trillpuv
Omg this is super cute. No unnecessary drama, just fluff! *sparkles* Kalden's going to be hopping mad lol, but he'll come around. His two favorite people are getting together, after all.
Omg this is super cute. No unnecessary drama, just fluff! *sparkles* Kalden's going to be hopping mad lol, but he'll come around. His two favorite people are getting together, after all.
8/24/2014 c1 Yenaya
Liked this one too :). Is this Chris the same Chris as the other one? I don't have a FictionPress account so you don't have to reply, but if you want to I'm on FanFiction under the same name.
Liked this one too :). Is this Chris the same Chris as the other one? I don't have a FictionPress account so you don't have to reply, but if you want to I'm on FanFiction under the same name.
3/25/2014 c1 Guest
Cliché...my God. Despite what other reviewers wrote, I don't think it is cute. I am not going to mention anything other that that which may come of as a blatant critique. But it is in my favorable opinion that you should make scenes to be slightly realistic. Of course, I can not be this argumentative against your fan fiction entries. You have my respect and salutation for those fictions, you see. I just don't happen to buy this story. But it is pretty much alright for an original story. It takes time to understand the basic foundations of romance. Next time, do make the 'love' theme a bit real. Aaron was alright. Wesley could use some tuning here. People usually take quite a bit of time to fall, alright? The younger Wesley isn't what I had expected. I thought that he was supposed to be reclusive.
P.S. I adore your Naruto stories. These original fictions didn't bode well for me, is all. I hope you understand the very configuration of slash stories. You can do away with the 'typical' environment. I have faith in you.
Don't take this the wrong way! I admire a fan fiction author(ess) who tries her/his hand at writing a variety of genres. Off to read your fanfiction stories.
Cliché...my God. Despite what other reviewers wrote, I don't think it is cute. I am not going to mention anything other that that which may come of as a blatant critique. But it is in my favorable opinion that you should make scenes to be slightly realistic. Of course, I can not be this argumentative against your fan fiction entries. You have my respect and salutation for those fictions, you see. I just don't happen to buy this story. But it is pretty much alright for an original story. It takes time to understand the basic foundations of romance. Next time, do make the 'love' theme a bit real. Aaron was alright. Wesley could use some tuning here. People usually take quite a bit of time to fall, alright? The younger Wesley isn't what I had expected. I thought that he was supposed to be reclusive.
P.S. I adore your Naruto stories. These original fictions didn't bode well for me, is all. I hope you understand the very configuration of slash stories. You can do away with the 'typical' environment. I have faith in you.
Don't take this the wrong way! I admire a fan fiction author(ess) who tries her/his hand at writing a variety of genres. Off to read your fanfiction stories.
2/25/2013 c1 Guest
fun and fluffy
fun and fluffy
7/14/2012 c1 Guest
This was super cute!
This was super cute!
1/3/2012 c1 
7Lavi the Ninja
It was beautifully written, and it made me sad to see it end. And I've been left speechless for this as well. I admit, I kind of was expecting them to get married.
7Lavi the NinjaIt was beautifully written, and it made me sad to see it end. And I've been left speechless for this as well. I admit, I kind of was expecting them to get married.
12/5/2011 c1 Adele
Awwww...So cute , I was smiling through the whole story :). Love it :)
p.s not sure if you are still active, but thought I'd leave a review nontheless.
Awwww...So cute , I was smiling through the whole story :). Love it :)
p.s not sure if you are still active, but thought I'd leave a review nontheless.
10/31/2011 c1 MeepaMoppaMoopa
SEQUAL. I DEMAND A SEQUAL.
SEQUAL. I DEMAND A SEQUAL.
10/31/2011 c1 thecrivens
Wow! very fluffy and sweet :D it's very different from Intervention, but I like this one too. My favorite character is Kalden though... he's so grumbly and messy and adorable. what will happen to him next? I want to know
Wow! very fluffy and sweet :D it's very different from Intervention, but I like this one too. My favorite character is Kalden though... he's so grumbly and messy and adorable. what will happen to him next? I want to know
10/17/2011 c1 4R. Ficst
absolutely love it! Love the pacing of their relationship, and their distinct personalities. For a nice short story you had just the right amount of background info, description, and detail. Very cute, very fun to read. Caught me up in their emotions, too. Feeling giggly one moment, and heated at another. Nicely done!
4R. Ficstabsolutely love it! Love the pacing of their relationship, and their distinct personalities. For a nice short story you had just the right amount of background info, description, and detail. Very cute, very fun to read. Caught me up in their emotions, too. Feeling giggly one moment, and heated at another. Nicely done!
10/16/2011 c1 iwanttodeletethiswtf
so cute, sooo adorable.
i like how your characters' personalities were like.. i'd say concrete,
but it was more like jello - solid, but with wiggle room. this is really
a great story, and it's so well-written. thank you for such a good read :)
-JB
so cute, sooo adorable.
i like how your characters' personalities were like.. i'd say concrete,
but it was more like jello - solid, but with wiggle room. this is really
a great story, and it's so well-written. thank you for such a good read :)
-JB
10/16/2011 c1 Ca383
This was really well written and interesting! I love how you described Aaron and Kalden's friendship and how Aaron could make Wes open up. It was very easy to get lost in their world. I will definitely read this again:)
This was really well written and interesting! I love how you described Aaron and Kalden's friendship and how Aaron could make Wes open up. It was very easy to get lost in their world. I will definitely read this again:)