for Mother of Learning9/20 c108 Emoswen
I'm a time loop fiction fanatic and this is truly a work of art. I really appreciate you sticking through this. I'm not sure, but is the name of this based after the Grey Hunter in the end? Anyway, this has been a really enjoyable part of my life for the past few months of reading this. Start to finish, I believe it's perfect.
I'm a time loop fiction fanatic and this is truly a work of art. I really appreciate you sticking through this. I'm not sure, but is the name of this based after the Grey Hunter in the end? Anyway, this has been a really enjoyable part of my life for the past few months of reading this. Start to finish, I believe it's perfect.
8/23 c44 Lukool1800
Oof for Zorian in the ways of social drama.
Oof for Zorian in the ways of social drama.
3/25 c1 Guest
I started reading this back in 2011 when you first started it and read it for the first couple years as you posted new chapters. I ended up taking a long hiatus and just recently came back to finish reading it. I'm so excited! I just wanted to say congratulations on publishing!
I started reading this back in 2011 when you first started it and read it for the first couple years as you posted new chapters. I ended up taking a long hiatus and just recently came back to finish reading it. I'm so excited! I just wanted to say congratulations on publishing!
3/11 c92 Guest
Just that ending sentence melted my heart. For all the entertaining fights and fantastic character and plot development, that might well be my favorite part so far. Sweet and wholesome and fantastic.
Just that ending sentence melted my heart. For all the entertaining fights and fantastic character and plot development, that might well be my favorite part so far. Sweet and wholesome and fantastic.
3/3 c108 Glaukops
Brilliant piece of fiction! I’d have loved to get a longer epilogue but apart from that I absolutely loved it.
Brilliant piece of fiction! I’d have loved to get a longer epilogue but apart from that I absolutely loved it.
1/22 c108 Reborn chris
Sharp
Sharp
1/18 c3 Knightly Reader
Having read to the end I would be really interested in how some of the side characters' months play out when Zorian makes different choices. I mean what happens when Zorian does not make the anti-rash slave?
Having read to the end I would be really interested in how some of the side characters' months play out when Zorian makes different choices. I mean what happens when Zorian does not make the anti-rash slave?
10/24/2022 c45 Returning Reader
I have enjoyed the story for years, coming back for many reread as it updated and finished. Can’t wait for my physical copy!
Anyway, the point of this specific review was to thank you for the diverse cast of female characters. They populate Zorian’s world the way they populate my own, something that should be common but is surprisingly rare in the fantasy genre. If I felt more confident about my ability to spell their names from memory I would list them, but as it stands I’ll simply say thank you for making them people with their own goals and lives rather than stereotypes and accessories. Zorian’s mother, sister, landlady, friends, classmates, teachers, and enemies all exist with as much detail as his male family, teachers, classmates, employers, and enemies. It sucks that I am so pleasantly surprised by it, but that doesn’t make the joy I get out of this story any less. I adore your wealth building and hope to continue enjoying it for decades to come..
Wish you the best.
I have enjoyed the story for years, coming back for many reread as it updated and finished. Can’t wait for my physical copy!
Anyway, the point of this specific review was to thank you for the diverse cast of female characters. They populate Zorian’s world the way they populate my own, something that should be common but is surprisingly rare in the fantasy genre. If I felt more confident about my ability to spell their names from memory I would list them, but as it stands I’ll simply say thank you for making them people with their own goals and lives rather than stereotypes and accessories. Zorian’s mother, sister, landlady, friends, classmates, teachers, and enemies all exist with as much detail as his male family, teachers, classmates, employers, and enemies. It sucks that I am so pleasantly surprised by it, but that doesn’t make the joy I get out of this story any less. I adore your wealth building and hope to continue enjoying it for decades to come..
Wish you the best.
10/16/2022 c2 Fence
Too much telling not enough showing of the characters and their emotions, too much just going through the daily life, there is no problem, no climax, only threat that has been even vaguely hinted at is something perhaps going on with the festival. All in all, not a bad read, just some small amateurish moves with the characters.
Too much telling not enough showing of the characters and their emotions, too much just going through the daily life, there is no problem, no climax, only threat that has been even vaguely hinted at is something perhaps going on with the festival. All in all, not a bad read, just some small amateurish moves with the characters.
10/7/2022 c44 Guest
The walking doormat is now comforting and soothing bruised egos that are jealous of him. Ugh.
The walking doormat is now comforting and soothing bruised egos that are jealous of him. Ugh.
10/7/2022 c43 Guest
The MC is way too much of a doormat. He lets himself get bullied into giving magic lessons to his 9 year old sister, babysitting her, and sinking hundreds of hours into her when she won’t even remember it because of the time loop.
He allows himself to get bullied into being forced to go to the school dance many times.
He spends hours doing menial tasks for no reward.
It’s just revolting he’s spent years in-loop-time wasting so much of his time.
The MC is way too much of a doormat. He lets himself get bullied into giving magic lessons to his 9 year old sister, babysitting her, and sinking hundreds of hours into her when she won’t even remember it because of the time loop.
He allows himself to get bullied into being forced to go to the school dance many times.
He spends hours doing menial tasks for no reward.
It’s just revolting he’s spent years in-loop-time wasting so much of his time.
10/6/2022 c17 Guest
The telepathic spider nonsense is very stupid.
The telepathic spider nonsense is very stupid.
10/6/2022 c15 Guest
The little sister is beyond annoying.
The little sister is beyond annoying.
10/3/2022 c108 Guest
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