for Bonded3/18/2018 c38 Acie
I loved Beth. I can't believeyou did that. I hate you.
Not really, I love the story but Damien was a great character plus she was pregnant. My poor heart
I loved Beth. I can't believeyou did that. I hate you.
Not really, I love the story but Damien was a great character plus she was pregnant. My poor heart
12/22/2017 c38 Guest
wait i thought kane and ryne were okay know
oh and i like the other one better
wait i thought kane and ryne were okay know
oh and i like the other one better
1/14/2016 c38 
75AlysonSerenaStone
Great story! I went ahead and downloaded some of the others on my Kindle! Looking forward to reading them!
75AlysonSerenaStoneGreat story! I went ahead and downloaded some of the others on my Kindle! Looking forward to reading them!
2/24/2015 c14 gulmina.khan.125
Plz upload betrayed book two also. i love ur book bt i have one point to share plx add some more romantic scene. i mean innocent romantic scene nt erotic one . we went to all fights and tension so we desirve atleast one chapter after their union in bonded. like mating it ahould have more i m sorry to say dat more ur books r coming more there r advantures more erotic scene bt romance is decreasing . no offence i m just a fan and its my suggestion i hope u wl consider it
Plz upload betrayed book two also. i love ur book bt i have one point to share plx add some more romantic scene. i mean innocent romantic scene nt erotic one . we went to all fights and tension so we desirve atleast one chapter after their union in bonded. like mating it ahould have more i m sorry to say dat more ur books r coming more there r advantures more erotic scene bt romance is decreasing . no offence i m just a fan and its my suggestion i hope u wl consider it
8/31/2014 c1 Julietish
Hi! It's Juliet from A Drop of Romeo. When your story was featured on ADoR, a judge wrote this review for it: Wow. That is what I thought when reading this. The prose is excellent and the plot is well paced and full of unexpected twists that keep you reading on.
One of my favourite things about this story was the dark undertone, caused by an underground extremist group called the Purists who want to remove all traces humans from within Lycan bloodlines. Fighting the expansion of this group, and also keeping the existence of werewolves secret from humans is Lycan Link, where our two main characters work.
Brandi and Reno have such wonderful chemistry throughout, though it does turn to hate near the beginning as the two are perhaps the most stubborn leads, ever. Though both working to the same ultimate goal, they have such different opinions things that they can’t help but clash heads at every meeting. That aside, however, you can still feel the growing attachment between them as they work together in the fight against the Purists.
In Bonded, charliej has created a realistic, functioning society with its own problems, that are surprisingly relatable. In amongst the romance and threat, there’s also plenty of action, although it does get a little gruesome at times. It is heart-warming in some respects, and heartbreaking in others, to watch how the characters grow and change throughout this emotional rollercoaster of a story. The ending in particular is so beautiful yet bittersweet that I’d recommend several tissues
Hi! It's Juliet from A Drop of Romeo. When your story was featured on ADoR, a judge wrote this review for it: Wow. That is what I thought when reading this. The prose is excellent and the plot is well paced and full of unexpected twists that keep you reading on.
One of my favourite things about this story was the dark undertone, caused by an underground extremist group called the Purists who want to remove all traces humans from within Lycan bloodlines. Fighting the expansion of this group, and also keeping the existence of werewolves secret from humans is Lycan Link, where our two main characters work.
Brandi and Reno have such wonderful chemistry throughout, though it does turn to hate near the beginning as the two are perhaps the most stubborn leads, ever. Though both working to the same ultimate goal, they have such different opinions things that they can’t help but clash heads at every meeting. That aside, however, you can still feel the growing attachment between them as they work together in the fight against the Purists.
In Bonded, charliej has created a realistic, functioning society with its own problems, that are surprisingly relatable. In amongst the romance and threat, there’s also plenty of action, although it does get a little gruesome at times. It is heart-warming in some respects, and heartbreaking in others, to watch how the characters grow and change throughout this emotional rollercoaster of a story. The ending in particular is so beautiful yet bittersweet that I’d recommend several tissues
1/16/2014 c8 Augusta
I've noticed you have been spelling focused and focusing with double 'S's. Just point out a quick easy-to-fix mistake. By the way, you're an amazing writer! You should definitely take your novels to a publisher. :)
I've noticed you have been spelling focused and focusing with double 'S's. Just point out a quick easy-to-fix mistake. By the way, you're an amazing writer! You should definitely take your novels to a publisher. :)
8/4/2013 c35 earthbender068
so here's the deal. I'm avoiding betrayal. why? cause if I start reading it ill catch up, and then I have to wait for chapters. granted, you update pretty fast, but once the story is done, we as your readers have to wait until next year for your writing. not that it's a bad thing, cause you have to write/create at your pace. if you rushed, then the work would suffer. plus it's not the way you work.
so here I am re-reading bonded. I think out of all your female leads, I would probably identify with Brandi more. especially this chapter. I know what it is like to love someone you can never have. I understood her in throughout the story, but this is the chapter that really hits home. to essentially let go of a dream or hope, hurts like hell.
everything you ever hoped to have with that person is just that hope. feeling lost and sad cause your love could never be returned or accepted. how do you even move on knowing that you can't love anyone else? I've been in that situation. I'm in that situation. Brandi can't love anyone else besides Reno b/c of their bond, while I can't love anyone else because I can't trust after my last two relationships.
then there's Reno, who can't even comprehend loving someone like he does Brandi or BEING loved by anyone. makes me wonder about his mom or dad. makes me sad that he doesn't know how to be in love. I was always so scared that the would bolt when Brandi begged him not to bite her. that he would be so disgusted with himself that he'd leave. yet he stayed, so that means something. then he said he loved her and tossed her over his shoulder.
so here's the deal. I'm avoiding betrayal. why? cause if I start reading it ill catch up, and then I have to wait for chapters. granted, you update pretty fast, but once the story is done, we as your readers have to wait until next year for your writing. not that it's a bad thing, cause you have to write/create at your pace. if you rushed, then the work would suffer. plus it's not the way you work.
so here I am re-reading bonded. I think out of all your female leads, I would probably identify with Brandi more. especially this chapter. I know what it is like to love someone you can never have. I understood her in throughout the story, but this is the chapter that really hits home. to essentially let go of a dream or hope, hurts like hell.
everything you ever hoped to have with that person is just that hope. feeling lost and sad cause your love could never be returned or accepted. how do you even move on knowing that you can't love anyone else? I've been in that situation. I'm in that situation. Brandi can't love anyone else besides Reno b/c of their bond, while I can't love anyone else because I can't trust after my last two relationships.
then there's Reno, who can't even comprehend loving someone like he does Brandi or BEING loved by anyone. makes me wonder about his mom or dad. makes me sad that he doesn't know how to be in love. I was always so scared that the would bolt when Brandi begged him not to bite her. that he would be so disgusted with himself that he'd leave. yet he stayed, so that means something. then he said he loved her and tossed her over his shoulder.
7/11/2013 c38 2Sparxz
It has been a long time since I've been on this site and for some odd reason, though I had you favorited, I never got an email that you were posting again! Well, two nights ago I get a message from a few people from fictionpress who told me that my unfinished story has, yet again, been plagiarized. Someone apparently thought it was a good idea to post it in wattpad as their own work and change the name to The Little Black Dress. LOL! The name doesn't even match! Anyway, (aside from all of my rambling) when I came back to this site, I ran across the names of my favorite authors here and decided to look and see if anything new came up. I read this in one night. I Love Love Love this story! The world you've created for these wolves is simply amazing and I'm so glad you decided to write about them again! When I saw Kane and Ryne were mentioned here, and the way it tied everything together, I just couldn't help but read over the other stories as well. You tied them together great! So needless to say, I'm back to following!
2SparxzIt has been a long time since I've been on this site and for some odd reason, though I had you favorited, I never got an email that you were posting again! Well, two nights ago I get a message from a few people from fictionpress who told me that my unfinished story has, yet again, been plagiarized. Someone apparently thought it was a good idea to post it in wattpad as their own work and change the name to The Little Black Dress. LOL! The name doesn't even match! Anyway, (aside from all of my rambling) when I came back to this site, I ran across the names of my favorite authors here and decided to look and see if anything new came up. I read this in one night. I Love Love Love this story! The world you've created for these wolves is simply amazing and I'm so glad you decided to write about them again! When I saw Kane and Ryne were mentioned here, and the way it tied everything together, I just couldn't help but read over the other stories as well. You tied them together great! So needless to say, I'm back to following!
7/7/2013 c7 1MySinfulConsciousness
the story is addicting so far (but then again all your stories are like that!) the only thing that threw me off track was the name of Brandi's partner. I know this was made well before that incident occurred, but it still made me pause...anyway on with the readings!
1MySinfulConsciousnessthe story is addicting so far (but then again all your stories are like that!) the only thing that threw me off track was the name of Brandi's partner. I know this was made well before that incident occurred, but it still made me pause...anyway on with the readings!
6/15/2013 c11 Midnights Scream
Reno really is a good guy and so is Brandi though they both are super stubborn. great job!
Reno really is a good guy and so is Brandi though they both are super stubborn. great job!
5/9/2013 c38 1tolivelaughlove
I feel so incomplete. I am so sad. I just feel like I was watching a really good movie that suddenly ended w/o warning. I wished Damien/Beth!pup would have lived. Ugh. And what... Just.. Grrr. I feel so incomplete. Ahhh! I want to make and rp for this lol.
1tolivelaughloveI feel so incomplete. I am so sad. I just feel like I was watching a really good movie that suddenly ended w/o warning. I wished Damien/Beth!pup would have lived. Ugh. And what... Just.. Grrr. I feel so incomplete. Ahhh! I want to make and rp for this lol.