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12/16/2011 c1 2tilly07
aw~ it's so sad and sweet.

I really like the different scenes and how you put in the color.

I really like it.
10/29/2011 c1 1Exsomnis
Very well written, and VERY interesting.
10/23/2011 c1 8urtenshii
This was a bit confusing probably because only snippets of incidents were placed. Nonetheless, I like this because of the little fluff between Juliet and Nathaniel. Not to mention, that I've always liked the name Nathaniel :)

Though, it was really quite a sad story and some things were unresolved. Though, personally, I just think that everything's in the story, there was just no confirmation whatsoever of the real reasons behind the incidents.

I liked the imagery, though. I liked how you portrayed the place. It's like an artist painting on a canvass :) You seemed to paint pictures with your word and it certainly helped the scenery.

I'm not gonna go technical on you, because that's not exactly my thing. The plot's nice, though. But I guess it would've been better if it was longer :) Just sayin' though.

~ Jessa :)

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