for Reverse Happy Ending3/29/2013 c16 scarletfleur
haa, that was amazing! glad you're back!
best line: "Wow. The Romeo and Juliet of Bromanceland."
haa, that was amazing! glad you're back!
best line: "Wow. The Romeo and Juliet of Bromanceland."
3/29/2013 c16 theofficialbest
That was AH-MAY-ZING! And I don't sy that a lot. Why are they scared of Luisa? Maybe when they were younger she beat the shit out of them? Ahh, that would be funny. Well done, girl! Keep this up and you'll have it p to the ublished!
That was AH-MAY-ZING! And I don't sy that a lot. Why are they scared of Luisa? Maybe when they were younger she beat the shit out of them? Ahh, that would be funny. Well done, girl! Keep this up and you'll have it p to the ublished!
3/29/2013 c16 mylittleprincess
YAY! you update ,more please:)
YAY! you update ,more please:)
3/29/2013 c16 
3dream-beautiful
Ahhhh finally! I missed this story so much. Think you could do a little recap paragraph at the beginning of the next chapters because I've forgotten so much of the story lol.
3dream-beautifulAhhhh finally! I missed this story so much. Think you could do a little recap paragraph at the beginning of the next chapters because I've forgotten so much of the story lol.
3/28/2013 c15 4Let'sGetDownToBusiness
Please, please, update this story, I'm begging you. I love the characters, I love the storyline, & I love the drama.
Right now I would be giving you constructive criticism on how I think your story could improve, but honestly? I can't think of anything other than you should complete it. So update! :]
4Let'sGetDownToBusinessPlease, please, update this story, I'm begging you. I love the characters, I love the storyline, & I love the drama.
Right now I would be giving you constructive criticism on how I think your story could improve, but honestly? I can't think of anything other than you should complete it. So update! :]
1/22/2013 c1 Autumn Mosaic
I'm not sure how I stumbled on this story, but I have enjoyed it, especially since I thought I was only perusing completed stories at the time. I am hoping that the review will encourage you to UPDATE, since I really dislike getting into a story and then not finishing it, lol!
I'm not sure how I stumbled on this story, but I have enjoyed it, especially since I thought I was only perusing completed stories at the time. I am hoping that the review will encourage you to UPDATE, since I really dislike getting into a story and then not finishing it, lol!
12/30/2012 c15 5poopforbrains
Oh, sweet baby Jesus. More! I'm addicted to this! Love, love, love Claire. She's one helluva funny character. :))
5poopforbrainsOh, sweet baby Jesus. More! I'm addicted to this! Love, love, love Claire. She's one helluva funny character. :))
12/4/2012 c12 Bookcraze
Ok i know u most probably wont read this cause its on a previous chapter but let me declare my love 4 ur stories...there i said it. Till now ive read teen. Mom, mismatch and now this. I am writing this cause i dont want to stop reading. Simple. I cant. I love the characters and i love ur ideas. Lovelove. If i was able to, i would send valantines to ur stories :-D yes im that deeply in love. If u by any chance read this then u will get the hint from this flatery...UPDATE ALL STORIES. The fact that it might be difficult 4 u to write them all at Once is well... You will simply have to find a way around it. I dont care if u give me ur email address and i have to go through a video call to hear ur story verbally. Hell, give me ur house address and i'll personally give u a visit to remind u to update. Oh and for more flatery...i propose to ur writting skills :-P
Ok i know u most probably wont read this cause its on a previous chapter but let me declare my love 4 ur stories...there i said it. Till now ive read teen. Mom, mismatch and now this. I am writing this cause i dont want to stop reading. Simple. I cant. I love the characters and i love ur ideas. Lovelove. If i was able to, i would send valantines to ur stories :-D yes im that deeply in love. If u by any chance read this then u will get the hint from this flatery...UPDATE ALL STORIES. The fact that it might be difficult 4 u to write them all at Once is well... You will simply have to find a way around it. I dont care if u give me ur email address and i have to go through a video call to hear ur story verbally. Hell, give me ur house address and i'll personally give u a visit to remind u to update. Oh and for more flatery...i propose to ur writting skills :-P
7/17/2012 c15 3nonaccount
While I do still love this story, I feel it could be improved upon. If you edit the whole thing in the future, please don't make the setting America because it clearly isn't (we don't use the term "comfort room" or "paracetamol" or a bunch of other things that I forget right now) it will ring more true to the reader if it's set in Australia or Asia somewhere or wherever you are. Also, I worry that the overall plot is getting bogged down in this hard to believe economic war between the Sterlings and the Westons or that the WHOLE school would care and take such clear sides. I just can't believe it and it's pulling me out of what is, otherwise, a really cute idea. I truly hope that you don't mind this constructive criticism because, again, I think it's a great story. :)
3nonaccountWhile I do still love this story, I feel it could be improved upon. If you edit the whole thing in the future, please don't make the setting America because it clearly isn't (we don't use the term "comfort room" or "paracetamol" or a bunch of other things that I forget right now) it will ring more true to the reader if it's set in Australia or Asia somewhere or wherever you are. Also, I worry that the overall plot is getting bogged down in this hard to believe economic war between the Sterlings and the Westons or that the WHOLE school would care and take such clear sides. I just can't believe it and it's pulling me out of what is, otherwise, a really cute idea. I truly hope that you don't mind this constructive criticism because, again, I think it's a great story. :)
7/16/2012 c6 nonaccount
Oh. My. God. I LOVE this so much! I'm a sucker for the love-hate dynamic and then this spins it on it's ear - genius! :)
Oh. My. God. I LOVE this so much! I'm a sucker for the love-hate dynamic and then this spins it on it's ear - genius! :)
7/11/2012 c13 3aMyTaichoDa
By Golly, you ratty old thing. You've done it again.
HOW, I mean, just HOW can you come up with this stuff? I mean, here i am, drool over my keyboard, reading through this unnaturaly, DISGUSTINGLY amazing story, just wondering, HOW THE HELL DO YOU DO IT.
I love you. I seriously just... Wowzers. I tip my hat ;)
OMG I CAN'T WAIT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEEEEEEXXXXXTTTTTT. And, call me a freak (wouldn't be the first time anyway. Yeah, neglected kid and rotten childhood here. But hey, whatcha gonna do?) but I think I'm getting the hots for Cedric 3 huhuhu. However, the normal, non-twisted part of my heart still aches for James, while the darkest, biotchiest depths of it hate Claire for having both.
But hey, a girl can dream, now, can't she? (;
SO KEEP WRITTING! I'm seriously just living for this story now, you genius little thing, you.
;D soo get those fingers typin, sister.
aMyTaichoDa
3aMyTaichoDaBy Golly, you ratty old thing. You've done it again.
HOW, I mean, just HOW can you come up with this stuff? I mean, here i am, drool over my keyboard, reading through this unnaturaly, DISGUSTINGLY amazing story, just wondering, HOW THE HELL DO YOU DO IT.
I love you. I seriously just... Wowzers. I tip my hat ;)
OMG I CAN'T WAIT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEEEEEEXXXXXTTTTTT. And, call me a freak (wouldn't be the first time anyway. Yeah, neglected kid and rotten childhood here. But hey, whatcha gonna do?) but I think I'm getting the hots for Cedric 3 huhuhu. However, the normal, non-twisted part of my heart still aches for James, while the darkest, biotchiest depths of it hate Claire for having both.
But hey, a girl can dream, now, can't she? (;
SO KEEP WRITTING! I'm seriously just living for this story now, you genius little thing, you.
;D soo get those fingers typin, sister.
aMyTaichoDa
7/8/2012 c1 4blueee
I really like your writing style, it moves in a faster pace but because of that, it isn't boring to read and is just perfect :D
4blueeeI really like your writing style, it moves in a faster pace but because of that, it isn't boring to read and is just perfect :D
7/3/2012 c1 Guest
Great story! I can't decide between Cedric and James lol...but I'd have to say I'm leaning more towards James ;). update soon! Pleaseee :)
Great story! I can't decide between Cedric and James lol...but I'd have to say I'm leaning more towards James ;). update soon! Pleaseee :)
6/20/2012 c15 EmeraldLily
Aww. Psh, I like James better. Cedric is coming off... Wrong. In my opinion. But I always had a thing for the sweet golden boy, I guess. Wonderful chapter! I'm just as confused as Claire right now so that's refreshing. Most stories are very forward with their story (e.g. New school, cute boy and prom) but not you since you make it puzzling. I love the way you write! Update soon!
Aww. Psh, I like James better. Cedric is coming off... Wrong. In my opinion. But I always had a thing for the sweet golden boy, I guess. Wonderful chapter! I'm just as confused as Claire right now so that's refreshing. Most stories are very forward with their story (e.g. New school, cute boy and prom) but not you since you make it puzzling. I love the way you write! Update soon!