for The Kingdom of Mist11/2/2011 c7 deadgummiegirl
Yea! So glad Lawson and Turner are not able to speak. And I'm glad it was Sage that was in the wheel room, even though she brought bad news with her. I was just expecting Cole and Elena to get the crap kicked out of them, but they're safe for now;)
Yea! So glad Lawson and Turner are not able to speak. And I'm glad it was Sage that was in the wheel room, even though she brought bad news with her. I was just expecting Cole and Elena to get the crap kicked out of them, but they're safe for now;)
11/2/2011 c7 
2Autumn's Imagination
I think I am addictied to these stories.
I love the narrative, the characters and the plot is really interesting so keep it up!
2Autumn's ImaginationI think I am addictied to these stories.
I love the narrative, the characters and the plot is really interesting so keep it up!
11/1/2011 c6 deadgummiegirl
OMG! I love Cole and his ridiculous outbursts! "I'm getting faint!" ;) "It feels great, by the way. The sex does, I mean." haha:P Cole is awesome. Thank god Phinn came in or Elena would have probably bled out. I didn't even think of Cole being able to give blood.
And of course I still feel sorry for Elena and her random acts of stupidness. No wonder Lawson's pissed. When someone's injured and weak with their mouth glued shut, that is not the time to bring up that you would never marry them:/
OMG! I love Cole and his ridiculous outbursts! "I'm getting faint!" ;) "It feels great, by the way. The sex does, I mean." haha:P Cole is awesome. Thank god Phinn came in or Elena would have probably bled out. I didn't even think of Cole being able to give blood.
And of course I still feel sorry for Elena and her random acts of stupidness. No wonder Lawson's pissed. When someone's injured and weak with their mouth glued shut, that is not the time to bring up that you would never marry them:/
10/31/2011 c6 1lobsterwife
Like Elena, I didn't figure out that Cole could provide the chaste blood either haha. Sneaky kid. Oh well, I still like him. And I love how the first thing out of Turner's mouth was an insult toward his brother. Poor Elena :( She's not only on shaky ground with Phinn, but now Lawson won't even talk to her. I hope things get better for her!
1lobsterwifeLike Elena, I didn't figure out that Cole could provide the chaste blood either haha. Sneaky kid. Oh well, I still like him. And I love how the first thing out of Turner's mouth was an insult toward his brother. Poor Elena :( She's not only on shaky ground with Phinn, but now Lawson won't even talk to her. I hope things get better for her!
10/30/2011 c5 deadgummiegirl
I am actually really glad she didn't get to go with Quentin. She's always tagging along and I want her to be stuck in the akward situation of being in the same room with Lawson;) But I do like when her and Quentin interact. He seems like the one to treat her the best, but then again it always seems like he thinks she's useless and kind of dumb. He's just not as obvious about it as everyone else is.
I am actually really glad she didn't get to go with Quentin. She's always tagging along and I want her to be stuck in the akward situation of being in the same room with Lawson;) But I do like when her and Quentin interact. He seems like the one to treat her the best, but then again it always seems like he thinks she's useless and kind of dumb. He's just not as obvious about it as everyone else is.
10/30/2011 c5 lobsterwife
Quentin ;_; Please be alright, dear. It would be sad if something happened to him. What would happen to poor Jenny? :( Oh, and I guess Ryder is in trouble too (I can't find it in my heart to worry about her though haha). Ryder is okay. I guess I'm still sore over how she was going to hurt Phinn that one time lol. I love how fast the updates are mwahahah :D
Quentin ;_; Please be alright, dear. It would be sad if something happened to him. What would happen to poor Jenny? :( Oh, and I guess Ryder is in trouble too (I can't find it in my heart to worry about her though haha). Ryder is okay. I guess I'm still sore over how she was going to hurt Phinn that one time lol. I love how fast the updates are mwahahah :D
10/29/2011 c4 deadgummiegirl
Awesome chapter. I think it was kind of random that Cole would think that chaste blood would work on the bindings, but in this world a lot of things are random and strange;) I kind of hope that they find out whats going on with Ryder's kingdom fast so they can try their theory. I want Turner and Lawson to get better and be able to talk again.
Awesome chapter. I think it was kind of random that Cole would think that chaste blood would work on the bindings, but in this world a lot of things are random and strange;) I kind of hope that they find out whats going on with Ryder's kingdom fast so they can try their theory. I want Turner and Lawson to get better and be able to talk again.
10/27/2011 c3 deadgummiegirl
I forgot to review the last chapter:/ oops! But I loved it;) I knew everyone was going to blame Elena for Phinn not doing what they wanted.
I don't think I've ever felt more sorry for Elena than I do now. She's getting blamed for everything when she's actually not done anything wrong yet. And then she tries to do something productive(at least she thinks it is) by talking to Lawson and that just ends up making her feel worse. I hope she gets fed up with how the Sons are treating her and tells them how stupid they all are and that everything is their fault. But I doubt that would happen because no matter what gets thrown at her, Elena doesn't seem like the type of person to do that. I wish she would though!
I forgot to review the last chapter:/ oops! But I loved it;) I knew everyone was going to blame Elena for Phinn not doing what they wanted.
I don't think I've ever felt more sorry for Elena than I do now. She's getting blamed for everything when she's actually not done anything wrong yet. And then she tries to do something productive(at least she thinks it is) by talking to Lawson and that just ends up making her feel worse. I hope she gets fed up with how the Sons are treating her and tells them how stupid they all are and that everything is their fault. But I doubt that would happen because no matter what gets thrown at her, Elena doesn't seem like the type of person to do that. I wish she would though!
10/26/2011 c2 lobsterwife
Woo-hoo! Super fast update! This chapter was mostly exposition, but I loved being reintroduced to the Sons. I'm slowly warming up to Sage. Even though she was kind of snippy with Elena about the whole sex thing, I laughed (it's because i'm a bad person who snorted when sage talking about phinn "getting it up", so to speak). I feel like something big is going to happen soon, so I'm bracing myself for that. Until the next update :)
Woo-hoo! Super fast update! This chapter was mostly exposition, but I loved being reintroduced to the Sons. I'm slowly warming up to Sage. Even though she was kind of snippy with Elena about the whole sex thing, I laughed (it's because i'm a bad person who snorted when sage talking about phinn "getting it up", so to speak). I feel like something big is going to happen soon, so I'm bracing myself for that. Until the next update :)
10/25/2011 c1 deadgummiegirl
I'm so glad this story's getting started! I've been thinking about the whole will they or won't they go through with the deflowering, since the last story ended. I figured if they did it would take a long time and a lot of craziness before it actually happened and I'm pretty sure I'm right;) Mostly because Phinn obviously has feelings for Elena that he doesn't understand. And I think Elena has feelings for him too.
I kind of wish you'll drag it out as long as possible. I'm sure they'll be able to find enough trouble to get into before they have to face the inevitable.
I'm so glad this story's getting started! I've been thinking about the whole will they or won't they go through with the deflowering, since the last story ended. I figured if they did it would take a long time and a lot of craziness before it actually happened and I'm pretty sure I'm right;) Mostly because Phinn obviously has feelings for Elena that he doesn't understand. And I think Elena has feelings for him too.
I kind of wish you'll drag it out as long as possible. I'm sure they'll be able to find enough trouble to get into before they have to face the inevitable.
10/25/2011 c1 lobsterwife
Oh my god. I've been waiting very patiently for this, and it DID NOT disappoint! I was practically on the edge of my seat reading this haha. The Phinn and Elena dynamic is one of my favorite things about this series. I really like the way it's been developed. Phinn is an interesting guy, and I hope that we get more into his head during this book. I was kind of expecting him to "chicken out", honestly (that or Elena would say something). What exactly has Elena done to him (I have my theories lol)? I'm super excited for this book, and it's only the first chapter!
Oh my god. I've been waiting very patiently for this, and it DID NOT disappoint! I was practically on the edge of my seat reading this haha. The Phinn and Elena dynamic is one of my favorite things about this series. I really like the way it's been developed. Phinn is an interesting guy, and I hope that we get more into his head during this book. I was kind of expecting him to "chicken out", honestly (that or Elena would say something). What exactly has Elena done to him (I have my theories lol)? I'm super excited for this book, and it's only the first chapter!