
1/23/2012 c43 fanx2
ah! we were talking about here and then she was there! Whats this mean? i guess I could just read the next chapter after all.
ah! we were talking about here and then she was there! Whats this mean? i guess I could just read the next chapter after all.
1/23/2012 c42 fanx2
That last bit was really awesome for some reason. I like that Elena and COle are kind of becoming friends.
That last bit was really awesome for some reason. I like that Elena and COle are kind of becoming friends.
1/23/2012 c41 fanx2
Im actually really excited about the thought of a new CB. I hope this doesnt mean [email protected] lose Elena though, shes a great character.
Im actually really excited about the thought of a new CB. I hope this doesnt mean [email protected] lose Elena though, shes a great character.
1/23/2012 c40 fanx2
I think Phinn is a lot smarter than most people give him credit for.
I think Phinn is a lot smarter than most people give him credit for.
1/23/2012 c39 fanx2
aw, sometimes its easy to forget that Coles actually real young. He was so cute in this chapter. I can see this is going to start a new arc for his character
aw, sometimes its easy to forget that Coles actually real young. He was so cute in this chapter. I can see this is going to start a new arc for his character
1/22/2012 c44 deadgummiegirl
Yeah, I was totally off base last chapter:| I have no idea what I was thinking. But I do feel sorry for Cole even though he can be a brat most of the time. I feel sorry for all of them. And Phinn is such an ass!
Yeah, I was totally off base last chapter:| I have no idea what I was thinking. But I do feel sorry for Cole even though he can be a brat most of the time. I feel sorry for all of them. And Phinn is such an ass!
1/22/2012 c43 deadgummiegirl
So the ghost of Cole's mother is helping them evidently(by bringing the book to them). Maybe all the ghosts of their dead mothers aren't from Hunt after all? But why would they disappear when they heard his name? I'm so confused! You're to damn good at this writing thing!;)
So the ghost of Cole's mother is helping them evidently(by bringing the book to them). Maybe all the ghosts of their dead mothers aren't from Hunt after all? But why would they disappear when they heard his name? I'm so confused! You're to damn good at this writing thing!;)
1/22/2012 c42 deadgummiegirl
I have a feeling that a new Chaste Beauty won't be appearing any time soon. And I think by now that these people should know to never let anything out of their sight. It doesn't matter if it's a person or an object, if they don't have it with them it's going to disappear! Oh, and Cole is hilarious as always:)
I have a feeling that a new Chaste Beauty won't be appearing any time soon. And I think by now that these people should know to never let anything out of their sight. It doesn't matter if it's a person or an object, if they don't have it with them it's going to disappear! Oh, and Cole is hilarious as always:)
1/21/2012 c49
1lobsterwife
Wow. I never realized how many secrets Elena was keeping from Lawson haha. That whole bit with the awkward staring was hilarious. Phinn's angry WHAT? is usually my reaction when that happens. I love Elena the most when she's acting all neurotic and paranoid over human "relationships". Sigh, I relate to her so well. If I were in her shoes I would choose danger over awkwardness too. I don't care if Judge Hunt is going to strangle me to death! As long as I don't have to face an awkward situation haha. Oh man! One more chapter of Mist (assumingly anyway). Something bad is going to happen, isn't it? I can't handle waiting another day @[email protected]

Wow. I never realized how many secrets Elena was keeping from Lawson haha. That whole bit with the awkward staring was hilarious. Phinn's angry WHAT? is usually my reaction when that happens. I love Elena the most when she's acting all neurotic and paranoid over human "relationships". Sigh, I relate to her so well. If I were in her shoes I would choose danger over awkwardness too. I don't care if Judge Hunt is going to strangle me to death! As long as I don't have to face an awkward situation haha. Oh man! One more chapter of Mist (assumingly anyway). Something bad is going to happen, isn't it? I can't handle waiting another day @[email protected]
1/20/2012 c41 deadgummiegirl
It's good to see Cole changing. Although like Phinn said, who knows how long it will last.
I think it would be interesting to have another Chaste Beauty in the mix. But of course I would want Elena to stick around. I can't imagine her not in the story anymore. Plus I'm sure Lawson and Phinn would want her around too.
It's good to see Cole changing. Although like Phinn said, who knows how long it will last.
I think it would be interesting to have another Chaste Beauty in the mix. But of course I would want Elena to stick around. I can't imagine her not in the story anymore. Plus I'm sure Lawson and Phinn would want her around too.
1/20/2012 c40 deadgummiegirl
Phinn is just fantastic! I've always hated how everyone underestimated his brain power;) There is so much more to him. He kind of put Elena in her place by using her own words against her. I love it when the boys make Elena confused. This chapter made me so happy:)
Phinn is just fantastic! I've always hated how everyone underestimated his brain power;) There is so much more to him. He kind of put Elena in her place by using her own words against her. I love it when the boys make Elena confused. This chapter made me so happy:)
1/20/2012 c39 deadgummiegirl
Omg Cole is so cute. I sometimes forget he's not very old, but when he broke down like that, I just wanted to give him a hug. Hopefully he'll be ok and maybe a little more greatful and mature after going through all that. But not too mature, I think he'll always be a brat in some ways. And I really like how Elena has sort of become like a big sister figure for him. She's really grown as a character. She's still kind of aloof, but she's stronger and smarter than she was in the beginning.
Omg Cole is so cute. I sometimes forget he's not very old, but when he broke down like that, I just wanted to give him a hug. Hopefully he'll be ok and maybe a little more greatful and mature after going through all that. But not too mature, I think he'll always be a brat in some ways. And I really like how Elena has sort of become like a big sister figure for him. She's really grown as a character. She's still kind of aloof, but she's stronger and smarter than she was in the beginning.
1/20/2012 c38 deadgummiegirl
Phinn is so weird:) I love it. He always decides to make a move on Elena at the least appropriate time. If he didn't have such anger issues I'm sure he would be all over her all the time! He's like the angry version of drunk Turner. When Turner's drunk he's all flirty and Phinn just pushes himself on her. I loved this chapter!
Phinn is so weird:) I love it. He always decides to make a move on Elena at the least appropriate time. If he didn't have such anger issues I'm sure he would be all over her all the time! He's like the angry version of drunk Turner. When Turner's drunk he's all flirty and Phinn just pushes himself on her. I loved this chapter!
1/19/2012 c37 deadgummiegirl
This chapter is so depressing. Everyone's all weeping and sad and bloody. Everything just kind of went nuts! I do love seeing everyone kicking some butt and trying to keep themselves alive. The more action the better. I do hope Jackson is ok though, I've come to like him.
This chapter is so depressing. Everyone's all weeping and sad and bloody. Everything just kind of went nuts! I do love seeing everyone kicking some butt and trying to keep themselves alive. The more action the better. I do hope Jackson is ok though, I've come to like him.
1/19/2012 c36 deadgummiegirl
Good Lord I am so behind! I'm gonna try to catch up because I know some crazy stuff has happened since I last read it.
These poor people can't catch a break. I feel like nothing is going to get better for a long while. I can't even imagine a happy ending, even though the end is way off. And I feel bad for Lawson's family being involved. I want to blame Hayden and the Sons for it but I guess it's not really thier fault. And now that Emma opened the door to more chaos, I don't really like her that much:\ She was never one of my favorite characters.
Good Lord I am so behind! I'm gonna try to catch up because I know some crazy stuff has happened since I last read it.
These poor people can't catch a break. I feel like nothing is going to get better for a long while. I can't even imagine a happy ending, even though the end is way off. And I feel bad for Lawson's family being involved. I want to blame Hayden and the Sons for it but I guess it's not really thier fault. And now that Emma opened the door to more chaos, I don't really like her that much:\ She was never one of my favorite characters.