
11/3/2011 c1
63Saurosuchus
Nice prose. Very light, easy reading, but with a nice story that kept me enticed. I enjoyed the narrative. The "you" and "I" think isn't something I often run into, and I found it pretty enlightening. Keep it up. You have a lot of talent.

Nice prose. Very light, easy reading, but with a nice story that kept me enticed. I enjoyed the narrative. The "you" and "I" think isn't something I often run into, and I found it pretty enlightening. Keep it up. You have a lot of talent.