for Feathers in the Dust1/6/2012 c3 
2Mysticbreez
"So what did you do last Sunday?"
"Oh, you know, the usual; got killed, had to possess my body, strip it, give it a bath, all that good stuff. Hey, that technique you told me about cleaning brains off of sweatshirts really helped. Thanks a bunch."
"Oh, no problem. You just have to use the right stuff. See, Tide is good when it comes to digestive acid but not brain matter..."
That's the impression I get from your story xD
2Mysticbreez"So what did you do last Sunday?"
"Oh, you know, the usual; got killed, had to possess my body, strip it, give it a bath, all that good stuff. Hey, that technique you told me about cleaning brains off of sweatshirts really helped. Thanks a bunch."
"Oh, no problem. You just have to use the right stuff. See, Tide is good when it comes to digestive acid but not brain matter..."
That's the impression I get from your story xD
11/6/2011 c2 19Henry Viau
Again, great chapter. I'm loving the writing style, it's just very professional. (which is something you don't find on FP much these days.)
19Henry ViauAgain, great chapter. I'm loving the writing style, it's just very professional. (which is something you don't find on FP much these days.)
11/4/2011 c2 1SenselessSanity
Interesting setting and plot. I do want to see what happens in Chapter 3 :) Love the writing style. Please update soon! Although I actually thought that the protagonist was actually male in the first chapter until names were mentioned hahaha. she's spunky ;)
1SenselessSanityInteresting setting and plot. I do want to see what happens in Chapter 3 :) Love the writing style. Please update soon! Although I actually thought that the protagonist was actually male in the first chapter until names were mentioned hahaha. she's spunky ;)
11/2/2011 c1 1Cody.Zilinski
A very interesting story, certainly an intriguing concept. I can't wait to see more.
1Cody.ZilinskiA very interesting story, certainly an intriguing concept. I can't wait to see more.
10/30/2011 c1 19Henry Viau
Well I figured if I couldn't catch up on 12S, the least I could do was read this.
Very interesting concept, a great set up, too. I'm interested to see how this plays out.
As always, magnificently written, I found no errors. (Your writing puts mine to shame XD.)
19Henry ViauWell I figured if I couldn't catch up on 12S, the least I could do was read this.
Very interesting concept, a great set up, too. I'm interested to see how this plays out.
As always, magnificently written, I found no errors. (Your writing puts mine to shame XD.)