for Abrazame12/26/2012 c9 Snowlight
Story's getting interesting!
I shall continue reading!
Although there are parts that sounds sorta like Warriors, and sorta like Survivors. Was this intentional or not?
Story's getting interesting!
I shall continue reading!
Although there are parts that sounds sorta like Warriors, and sorta like Survivors. Was this intentional or not?
12/18/2012 c4 Snowlight
1. My second review on the second chapter was for the third.
2. I feel so sad for Pancho D:
*continues reading*
1. My second review on the second chapter was for the third.
2. I feel so sad for Pancho D:
*continues reading*
12/18/2012 c2 Snowlight
Is Bunny going to college or will be in a couple years?
It sounds like Bunny is learning/learned to drive now, so still in high school. Kids don't go on the school bus anymore around high school or once they graduate high school.
I'm no good in Spanish but trying my best with online translater to understand.
p.s. I have no idea why my profile picture is that, I don't even have an account so I have no idea why I have a profile picture.
Is Bunny going to college or will be in a couple years?
It sounds like Bunny is learning/learned to drive now, so still in high school. Kids don't go on the school bus anymore around high school or once they graduate high school.
I'm no good in Spanish but trying my best with online translater to understand.
p.s. I have no idea why my profile picture is that, I don't even have an account so I have no idea why I have a profile picture.
12/18/2012 c2 Snowlight
Hi!
I like your story.
So there's a thing called "Shimmering" now. Almost like StarClan.
Really great story! At first I didn't want to read this mainly because I didn't find much that I would like but since it was by you I gave it a shot.
AND I LOVE IT ;D
Yeah, I will continue reading it and wait for you to update this too :P
Hi!
I like your story.
So there's a thing called "Shimmering" now. Almost like StarClan.
Really great story! At first I didn't want to read this mainly because I didn't find much that I would like but since it was by you I gave it a shot.
AND I LOVE IT ;D
Yeah, I will continue reading it and wait for you to update this too :P
6/9/2012 c12 Flabbergasted Flock
Awesome plot XD
And you left a cliffhanger TT when you haven't undated for half a year...
any chance of an update? D:
Awesome plot XD
And you left a cliffhanger TT when you haven't undated for half a year...
any chance of an update? D:
11/20/2011 c9 Sunspirit
Ooh! I like Felicity! She's so independent! And Cora is growing on me too. The story last chappie about Tanner's parents was so sad! It made me cry. We live in such a cruel world sometimes...
Anyway, I like Duke a lot too. He reminds me of a dog who lives on my street. He (the dog I know) is gigantic has a fearsome bark, but really he's just a big fuzzy softy(ie?). Did you get Portia's name from the Hunger Games? I love those books so much.
Ooh the starsong! I can just imagine it in my head. Beautiful.
So... I was gonna say something else... Oh right. I just loved this description: "its body was like that of a sausage, somewhat chubby and stretched." haha it makes me think of Pancho standing there and thinking "hey look it's a sausage! Oh right that's a puppy." idk it just cracked me up.
Well, that's all. Sorry I didn't review earlier. It was awesome, like always! Keep ip the good work and update! =•]
Ooh! I like Felicity! She's so independent! And Cora is growing on me too. The story last chappie about Tanner's parents was so sad! It made me cry. We live in such a cruel world sometimes...
Anyway, I like Duke a lot too. He reminds me of a dog who lives on my street. He (the dog I know) is gigantic has a fearsome bark, but really he's just a big fuzzy softy(ie?). Did you get Portia's name from the Hunger Games? I love those books so much.
Ooh the starsong! I can just imagine it in my head. Beautiful.
So... I was gonna say something else... Oh right. I just loved this description: "its body was like that of a sausage, somewhat chubby and stretched." haha it makes me think of Pancho standing there and thinking "hey look it's a sausage! Oh right that's a puppy." idk it just cracked me up.
Well, that's all. Sorry I didn't review earlier. It was awesome, like always! Keep ip the good work and update! =•]
11/20/2011 c9 Shimjim
Poor Pancho just can't catch a break, can he? Just one traumatizing event after another. It was sweet of Copper and Ebony to come after him, and at least Skipper tried. Hmm, all this talk about Yip-touched and Growl-touched dogs makes me curious. Does it mean a dog that acts particularly like Yip or Growl?
Simon has "I'm secretly a villain" written all over him. It think I dislike him more than Cora. Okay, let me rephrase: I dislike him way more than Cora. I wish he would die painfully.
The trip to the scrapyard was interesting, and the puppies sound adorable. Felicity's a bit hostile, yes? I'm curious to see what her and Duke's relationship it.
Amazing, dahlin. Keep it up.
Poor Pancho just can't catch a break, can he? Just one traumatizing event after another. It was sweet of Copper and Ebony to come after him, and at least Skipper tried. Hmm, all this talk about Yip-touched and Growl-touched dogs makes me curious. Does it mean a dog that acts particularly like Yip or Growl?
Simon has "I'm secretly a villain" written all over him. It think I dislike him more than Cora. Okay, let me rephrase: I dislike him way more than Cora. I wish he would die painfully.
The trip to the scrapyard was interesting, and the puppies sound adorable. Felicity's a bit hostile, yes? I'm curious to see what her and Duke's relationship it.
Amazing, dahlin. Keep it up.
11/14/2011 c8 
2Wolfgrowl
Cora's kinda harsh. I know she's the First now, but surely someone can tell her to ease up on Pancho?
2WolfgrowlCora's kinda harsh. I know she's the First now, but surely someone can tell her to ease up on Pancho?
11/13/2011 c8 Ahrendaaria
I LOVE this story! Your a very talented writer! :D Please update soon!
-Ahrendaaria
I LOVE this story! Your a very talented writer! :D Please update soon!
-Ahrendaaria
11/11/2011 c7 Shimjim
*stares at the screen in horror* I think I need a moment...
Wow. That's all I have to say. Wow. For a story that's classed as Humor/Adventure, things just got real. My heart broke with each doggy that died, although Bella and Tobias's were the worst for me. Oh, Solomon! That wasn't fair, Prin. It really wasn't. I came in totally unprepared for this. You portrayed Cora's grief very well, I think, and I'll hunt you down if you kill Tanner. Seriously. I feel like Pancho grew up a lot in this chapter, what with it being his first real experience in the world. Hmm, these little poems at the top are making me curious, very curious. Could the Bandit be the black dog Pancho dreamed about? What's his importance in the story? Update soon, please.
*stares at the screen in horror* I think I need a moment...
Wow. That's all I have to say. Wow. For a story that's classed as Humor/Adventure, things just got real. My heart broke with each doggy that died, although Bella and Tobias's were the worst for me. Oh, Solomon! That wasn't fair, Prin. It really wasn't. I came in totally unprepared for this. You portrayed Cora's grief very well, I think, and I'll hunt you down if you kill Tanner. Seriously. I feel like Pancho grew up a lot in this chapter, what with it being his first real experience in the world. Hmm, these little poems at the top are making me curious, very curious. Could the Bandit be the black dog Pancho dreamed about? What's his importance in the story? Update soon, please.
11/10/2011 c7 Wolfgrowl
Okay, I'll review.
Nicolas/Alexandra have very, * gestures serching for country * English? No, that's not write...
Whatever, they don't have Japanese names for being half-Borzoi.
Poor Tanner.
Okay, I'll review.
Nicolas/Alexandra have very, * gestures serching for country * English? No, that's not write...
Whatever, they don't have Japanese names for being half-Borzoi.
Poor Tanner.
11/9/2011 c6 Sunspirit
O M G! I REEEAAAALLYY hope that Rachel, Trixie, Bella, and Solomon aren't dead! But I know you! Who knows who's gonna be dead next!
Also, I think it's funny how house dogs don't know the real words for things like cars and glass, but the strays do.
You said a few chappies ago in the AN that someone had donated their dog to the Shimmering. What exactly does that mean? And do you need more dogs for it?
Geez these dogs are prejudice! Personally, I think that I'd rather be a stray, but I definitely respect Pancho as a housedog, unlike the strays in this book! Grrr! I am NOT fond of Cora! I hope she doesn't make it to First, like Nicolas said, cuz she shouldn't be badmouthing our dear adorable Pancho!
What else, what else... Oh right! Thank you for responding! I had no idea that dogs were only red-green colorblind, as well as cats! That's an awesome fact! Also, when Rachel found Pancho, they were talking about the Bandit. I'm guessing that the Bandit is some dog who is supposed to help them in their time of need or something, and the dogs are looking for him? Maybe?
Well, excellent chapter as usual! I expect no less! =] Keep up the good work!
O M G! I REEEAAAALLYY hope that Rachel, Trixie, Bella, and Solomon aren't dead! But I know you! Who knows who's gonna be dead next!
Also, I think it's funny how house dogs don't know the real words for things like cars and glass, but the strays do.
You said a few chappies ago in the AN that someone had donated their dog to the Shimmering. What exactly does that mean? And do you need more dogs for it?
Geez these dogs are prejudice! Personally, I think that I'd rather be a stray, but I definitely respect Pancho as a housedog, unlike the strays in this book! Grrr! I am NOT fond of Cora! I hope she doesn't make it to First, like Nicolas said, cuz she shouldn't be badmouthing our dear adorable Pancho!
What else, what else... Oh right! Thank you for responding! I had no idea that dogs were only red-green colorblind, as well as cats! That's an awesome fact! Also, when Rachel found Pancho, they were talking about the Bandit. I'm guessing that the Bandit is some dog who is supposed to help them in their time of need or something, and the dogs are looking for him? Maybe?
Well, excellent chapter as usual! I expect no less! =] Keep up the good work!