
2/16/2012 c1
619Jave Harron
Okay, this new character Foxfire seems okay, but I preferred your prior character Sullivan Dice. The villain of this first story was pretty good, as was a lot of the fight scenes and interaction with them. The pacing seemed okay, and the story went pretty fast for me.

Okay, this new character Foxfire seems okay, but I preferred your prior character Sullivan Dice. The villain of this first story was pretty good, as was a lot of the fight scenes and interaction with them. The pacing seemed okay, and the story went pretty fast for me.