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for Dark Breath

11/4/2011 c1 3Live2Learn
Just wanted to say that I really enjoyed your poem. I thought it was a great concept and worded beautifully. There was a couple "dead" words that you could take out that aren't really needed in my opinion. :) but overall I liked it! :) keep writing

ps. if you wanna know what "dead words" I'm talking ill be happy to tell you! :)

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