for You And Your 'Innocence'3/19/2012 c1 
8TheGreekGoddessAtalanta
Good job, but try to minimize the word length in some(one)of your longer sentences and replace it with fewer, more meaningful words. Other than that perfect.
8TheGreekGoddessAtalantaGood job, but try to minimize the word length in some(one)of your longer sentences and replace it with fewer, more meaningful words. Other than that perfect.