for Caretaker11/16/2011 c1 
29Velvet Vixen
This was lovely! I'm a fan of rhyming poems and this one was great. I think it was very telling that the sun was male - don't know if you were making a point there or if that's just me being very feminist! - and that the woman just does her best despite the male "dominance". Very nice :)
29Velvet VixenThis was lovely! I'm a fan of rhyming poems and this one was great. I think it was very telling that the sun was male - don't know if you were making a point there or if that's just me being very feminist! - and that the woman just does her best despite the male "dominance". Very nice :)