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11/22/2011 c1 23Love A Mysterious Thing
This was beautiful. I'd tell you my favorite part but I just loved the whole thing and every line was clean and clipped and to the point. I can feel the sadness and relate to this piece very well. Nice job!
11/14/2011 c1 33BookcraZzaY


Soul tattering

11/14/2011 c1 9TheActualKarly
This poem could have rhymed easy,

and though it is cheesy,

I'm going to rhyme this review,

just to show you.

You talk about depression,

Not about obsession,

Which you often do.

You talk about feeling numb,

Which certainly isn't dumb,

The nothing that comes after what was killing you before.

You mention stress,

Which I can only guess,

Is because you always are.

You mention caring,

Which I feel is daring,

Me to start being nice.

"You can't come out of the fog."

What a great metaphor,

You don't care what you ignore.

Longest review I've written,

I feel awesome like Britian!

So I guess I'll stop rhyming now.

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