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8/15/2013 c2 1twiinklex
Ouch :(
Hope to be able to read your other stories!
1/4/2013 c2 15thenifoundfivedollars
Let me know where you end up! I'm struggling with feeling secure as well, and while I haven't resorted to taking anything down I'm certainly not planning on putting anything new up. Something serious needs to happen.

Can I ask why you hate Wattpad? I'm hesitant to go there too, but I'm not exactly sure why.

Either way - best of luck! I do hope you return, especially if it's after fp makes the no-right-click function happen. Either way, speak to you soon! :D
12/22/2012 c1 4whatthegreencarrot
Too late... Ugh, I love it. You're making me feel inadequate :P

It's good. It's really, really good, even if it's just a couple hundred words. The ending's sad, but then again, how many happy endings can you write? I'm sure a lot of people would be able to relate to this. I can't (LOL, still in middle school, so I wouldn't know), but this really is quite good.
10/28/2012 c1 12clouds-in-a-jar
:(((( i love the end. a lot of people write this kind of situation but they never have that sort of gut-punch feeling that imo it should have. this totally has that though. i felt heavy and sad the whole time i was reading it.
5/23/2012 c1 7Mr. Ree
So, I finally took the time to creep on your stories (sadly, it's only one story) and I'm glad I did!

It's really short, but I really loved how there was all the elements of a longer oneshot. Like, the dialogue and non-dialogue really meshed well(I don't really know what that's called. Monologue is like the actual thought and not the story telling, right? I digress.)and I love how the two interacted with each other.

That is all
5/18/2012 c1 18FreekyDisaster18
Is this not a situation nearly 99% of people, males and females, can relate to? The unrequited love of a close friend... Gah! It was simply beautifully written. I'm usually a narration whore, I love it and can't get enough of it but yet your use of dialogue was flawless and spot on - really showed two friends having a chat! Fantastic. And you say you can't write... I'm going to pester you for more stories soon :P
4/18/2012 c1 Elusive Lucidity
This was pretty nice for a really short one-shot. The emotions that the girl was feeling really shone through. I wish you'd make it longer though. But I guess you didn't need to. It's amazing how little words can express so much. That's what your one-shot did. :)
11/14/2011 c1 2Annie not Annabel
Beautiful :) Captures the feeling of unrequited love perfectly.

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