for To an outsider1/8/2013 c1 
216ygg
Very thought-provoking and meaningful theme, especially given the path of contemporary society. Well written!
216yggVery thought-provoking and meaningful theme, especially given the path of contemporary society. Well written!
1/30/2012 c1 8Dark Blue Lover
Profound piece, I like the symbolism in this and the idea behind. Thoughtfully written too. Good job! Keep it up ^.^
8Dark Blue LoverProfound piece, I like the symbolism in this and the idea behind. Thoughtfully written too. Good job! Keep it up ^.^
12/28/2011 c1 2063M2R
Only have a word for this: wow.
I am at loss for words. Everything just swarms in and stack on one another. Profound piece of writing. Ahh... I need to find somewhere to hide myself and my writes!
2063M2ROnly have a word for this: wow.
I am at loss for words. Everything just swarms in and stack on one another. Profound piece of writing. Ahh... I need to find somewhere to hide myself and my writes!
12/7/2011 c1 4AshlynHibbs
X') You have a real way with words, my friend!
I wish I was good at poetry! Especially as good as this!
You did a wonderful job. This is truly a gem of free-form poetry. :)
I love how you plant ideas in the poem. It shows professional symbolism. My favorite was the line, "in a river tainted with the suicidal corpses of freedom." One can really sit and think about this. :) You can tell it's thoughtfully written, and it feels as though human feelings were behind it in writing.
Nicely done~
4AshlynHibbsX') You have a real way with words, my friend!
I wish I was good at poetry! Especially as good as this!
You did a wonderful job. This is truly a gem of free-form poetry. :)
I love how you plant ideas in the poem. It shows professional symbolism. My favorite was the line, "in a river tainted with the suicidal corpses of freedom." One can really sit and think about this. :) You can tell it's thoughtfully written, and it feels as though human feelings were behind it in writing.
Nicely done~
11/17/2011 c1 Punslinger
Excellent. A profound bit of introspection presented with fine poetic craftsmanship. Quite worthy of the Emerson quote.
Excellent. A profound bit of introspection presented with fine poetic craftsmanship. Quite worthy of the Emerson quote.