11/29/2011 c1 2KskyeM
Stop saying it will be rubbish!
I really like this, normaly i would'nt read something like this but it just sort of flashed in front of my eyes and i thought i would give it a go.
I love the way you've started it, it's not how i though you would.
I cant wait to see what the next chapter will bring.
~ Skye
Stop saying it will be rubbish!
I really like this, normaly i would'nt read something like this but it just sort of flashed in front of my eyes and i thought i would give it a go.
I love the way you've started it, it's not how i though you would.
I cant wait to see what the next chapter will bring.
~ Skye
11/19/2011 c1 RooFaDoo
Nice cliffhanger; It definitely leaves readers wanting more.
It's not bad. But I can't tell since it's just the beginning. :P
I'm no good with reviews, but keep writing! :D
Nice cliffhanger; It definitely leaves readers wanting more.
It's not bad. But I can't tell since it's just the beginning. :P
I'm no good with reviews, but keep writing! :D