for Hopeless12/23/2011 c3 strawberiies
Again, love the story. And I'm glad you're giving us more of Hades' perspective. I hope they are able to work through their misunderstandings. I am also hoping that you put them in a different situation; as of now you have the singular idea of denial. Which is completely understandable, considering.
"He gives me hope," - Love that line. Especially considering your title.
Love your writing, xx
Again, love the story. And I'm glad you're giving us more of Hades' perspective. I hope they are able to work through their misunderstandings. I am also hoping that you put them in a different situation; as of now you have the singular idea of denial. Which is completely understandable, considering.
"He gives me hope," - Love that line. Especially considering your title.
Love your writing, xx
12/23/2011 c3 
4AboutAs SubtleAs A FlyingBrick
Love the story but I it's not exactly m rated, it's pretty much a k+. Interesting but I would liket I see Persephkne show a bit more love towards Hades even though he kidnapped her. They showed some attraction to eachother do why isn't persephone? Remember, Persephone had a child with Zeus, thinking it was her husband Hades so she obviously wanted to be with hades. Wish you had made the characters non related since Persephone is basically hades niece and Hades and Zeus are brothers. It's a wierd world in Olympus, full of incest and unfaithfulness. Please continue writting but don't run out of ideas, I hope you have this story planned out cuz i really like it! Keep writting x
4AboutAs SubtleAs A FlyingBrickLove the story but I it's not exactly m rated, it's pretty much a k+. Interesting but I would liket I see Persephkne show a bit more love towards Hades even though he kidnapped her. They showed some attraction to eachother do why isn't persephone? Remember, Persephone had a child with Zeus, thinking it was her husband Hades so she obviously wanted to be with hades. Wish you had made the characters non related since Persephone is basically hades niece and Hades and Zeus are brothers. It's a wierd world in Olympus, full of incest and unfaithfulness. Please continue writting but don't run out of ideas, I hope you have this story planned out cuz i really like it! Keep writting x
12/15/2011 c2 strawberiies
I personally love it! Ignore the people who haven't reviewed, I'm pretty sure they love it too. This is a very unique telling of the myth- although I am somewhat saddened by the current relationship of Persephone and Hades, I am confident you will expand on it.
Your descriptions and word choice is amazing. I love your writing style.
Thank you for writing, xx
I personally love it! Ignore the people who haven't reviewed, I'm pretty sure they love it too. This is a very unique telling of the myth- although I am somewhat saddened by the current relationship of Persephone and Hades, I am confident you will expand on it.
Your descriptions and word choice is amazing. I love your writing style.
Thank you for writing, xx