for Toxic12/16/2011 c3 
2Clawstrike590
Ugh. It's been five days since you uploaded it and i only noticed today!
Anyway. The chapter is great. Can't wait for the next one. Although I'm a bit sad that it's the last. I'm just hoping the next story still surrounds the world you've created. Can't wait to read more of it!
Your faithful reader,
Clawstrike590
2Clawstrike590Ugh. It's been five days since you uploaded it and i only noticed today!
Anyway. The chapter is great. Can't wait for the next one. Although I'm a bit sad that it's the last. I'm just hoping the next story still surrounds the world you've created. Can't wait to read more of it!
Your faithful reader,
Clawstrike590
11/28/2011 c2 black-misty-sky
EEEEEEEEEKKKKK! THIS IS TOTALLY AMAZING!.
DAMN! i wish it was bigger then a three shot though! cuz it would be really great as a full length story! :).
I love your writing style!
BMS
EEEEEEEEEKKKKK! THIS IS TOTALLY AMAZING!.
DAMN! i wish it was bigger then a three shot though! cuz it would be really great as a full length story! :).
I love your writing style!
BMS
11/26/2011 c2 1the unbirthday girl
That was very...interesting. *tries not to laugh* Nice chapter. For some reason, their awkward interactions make me feel like rolling on the floor and laughing hysterically. Hmm.:D
1the unbirthday girlThat was very...interesting. *tries not to laugh* Nice chapter. For some reason, their awkward interactions make me feel like rolling on the floor and laughing hysterically. Hmm.:D
11/25/2011 c2 2Clawstrike590
Really, really awesome. You can feel the tension between them. Wow. Update soon!
Your reader,
Clawstrike590
2Clawstrike590Really, really awesome. You can feel the tension between them. Wow. Update soon!
Your reader,
Clawstrike590
11/20/2011 c1 CherryRipeKisses
I really like it. I can see you've put a lot of thought into the universe of the story and I have to say that the universe is pretty cool! Sara is damn sexy but you didn't describe Roy. Will you describe him?
Anyways, I LOVED it. Seriously. Keep writing :P
I really like it. I can see you've put a lot of thought into the universe of the story and I have to say that the universe is pretty cool! Sara is damn sexy but you didn't describe Roy. Will you describe him?
Anyways, I LOVED it. Seriously. Keep writing :P
11/20/2011 c1 Sasquatch818
I loved it! It is sooo not fictionpress worthy! All your books aren't! Publish. I will def buy them! you are a wondeful writer with amazing talents. UD soon:D
I loved it! It is sooo not fictionpress worthy! All your books aren't! Publish. I will def buy them! you are a wondeful writer with amazing talents. UD soon:D