for For The Fans12/24/2012 c53 
2believe1nbeauty
Hey it's me katie-and-alexox!
I'm really sorry for not reviewing this for like five months! I really am sorry! /
But this was such an amazing story! I loved reading it and the baby sounds so cute! And lol Michael comforting himself was funny! Beautiful ending! :)
2believe1nbeautyHey it's me katie-and-alexox!
I'm really sorry for not reviewing this for like five months! I really am sorry! /
But this was such an amazing story! I loved reading it and the baby sounds so cute! And lol Michael comforting himself was funny! Beautiful ending! :)
9/22/2012 c53 1mydreamadventure
this. is. the. sweetest. sotry. EVER! i loved it every minute, but some pointers it kind of focus so much on the relationship we skip out on the music career part and the whole tour and everything, maybe you should take some things a bit more slower? :) but other wise lovveeddd it!
1mydreamadventurethis. is. the. sweetest. sotry. EVER! i loved it every minute, but some pointers it kind of focus so much on the relationship we skip out on the music career part and the whole tour and everything, maybe you should take some things a bit more slower? :) but other wise lovveeddd it!
9/21/2012 c18 mydreamadventure
ahhh im absolutely looooovinggg this story! its so captivating, and i like how youve done the both ians and baileys views. sweet story keep it up :)
ahhh im absolutely looooovinggg this story! its so captivating, and i like how youve done the both ians and baileys views. sweet story keep it up :)
8/12/2012 c53 w3ardo
i got a shout out twice! and its finally done, wow that took a long time... lots of chappies too.
congrats on finishing! :)
i got a shout out twice! and its finally done, wow that took a long time... lots of chappies too.
congrats on finishing! :)
7/30/2012 c53 1Amazing Cat12
You are very welcome! I loved this story, and cannot believe it is over!
1Amazing Cat12You are very welcome! I loved this story, and cannot believe it is over!
7/29/2012 c53 2Felicia Huey
I actually really like it in third person! Just think about that for your next story. Anyway awwww! For some reason I thought that Ian and Bailey would break up before the stories end. But they didn't.
I have to give you some advice now that may or may not sound mean, but yeah. It's not supposed to be mean.
You might have possibly put a little more about their music careers in here. Unless, of course, they aren't coming out with a new album, which is unlikely.
Also, there weren't really any problems in the book. I get that it was a light story, but you definitely need more. Take that into consideration.
Anyway, I enjoyed this book and I will read the next one :)
2Felicia HueyI actually really like it in third person! Just think about that for your next story. Anyway awwww! For some reason I thought that Ian and Bailey would break up before the stories end. But they didn't.
I have to give you some advice now that may or may not sound mean, but yeah. It's not supposed to be mean.
You might have possibly put a little more about their music careers in here. Unless, of course, they aren't coming out with a new album, which is unlikely.
Also, there weren't really any problems in the book. I get that it was a light story, but you definitely need more. Take that into consideration.
Anyway, I enjoyed this book and I will read the next one :)
7/29/2012 c53 2simplyunpublished
First of all, I loved the story and can't wait to read about Zane.
One thing though: " Bailey chuckled and said, "Hey, what are sister-in-laws for?" " It's a sentence just above a line, as I recall. The plural of sister-in-law is actually sisterS-in-law, not sister-in-lawS. I'm being insanely nit-picky, but this is one of my biggest pet peeves in stories that are otherwise grammatically perfect (or close to it).
I still loved the story and want you to know that if I didn't, I wouldn't take the time to review at all. Congrats on finishing this story and I hope you continue writing!
2simplyunpublishedFirst of all, I loved the story and can't wait to read about Zane.
One thing though: " Bailey chuckled and said, "Hey, what are sister-in-laws for?" " It's a sentence just above a line, as I recall. The plural of sister-in-law is actually sisterS-in-law, not sister-in-lawS. I'm being insanely nit-picky, but this is one of my biggest pet peeves in stories that are otherwise grammatically perfect (or close to it).
I still loved the story and want you to know that if I didn't, I wouldn't take the time to review at all. Congrats on finishing this story and I hope you continue writing!
7/26/2012 c52 Randomly Obsessed
Beautiful job once again, I love how the characters act real, were as other fics they characters are always over dramatic. This story is amazing, keep it up! :D
Beautiful job once again, I love how the characters act real, were as other fics they characters are always over dramatic. This story is amazing, keep it up! :D
7/25/2012 c52 2believe1nbeauty
Yay the idiot is gone! And honestly I wasn't really surprised when Ian expressed his happiness! I mean he's that kinda guy you know, totally unexpected and sweet! Can't wait for the next chapter!
2believe1nbeautyYay the idiot is gone! And honestly I wasn't really surprised when Ian expressed his happiness! I mean he's that kinda guy you know, totally unexpected and sweet! Can't wait for the next chapter!
7/15/2012 c51 2Felicia Huey
So, erm. I thought she already knew she was pregnant in the last chapter? She told Ian she was. Ummm. Confusing. Yes. I liked this chapter, although it almost seemed like a repeat of the last one. They talked about how Trevor kissed her, how she's pregnant, blah. No offense, I did like the chapter, but yeah. :)
Update soon!
2Felicia HueySo, erm. I thought she already knew she was pregnant in the last chapter? She told Ian she was. Ummm. Confusing. Yes. I liked this chapter, although it almost seemed like a repeat of the last one. They talked about how Trevor kissed her, how she's pregnant, blah. No offense, I did like the chapter, but yeah. :)
Update soon!
7/14/2012 c51 2believe1nbeauty
Honestly I have no clue what to say! They are pretty young but they might actually make good parents don't you think? And it's sad that this story will be ending soon but it's for the best I guess :)
Update soon! xx
2believe1nbeautyHonestly I have no clue what to say! They are pretty young but they might actually make good parents don't you think? And it's sad that this story will be ending soon but it's for the best I guess :)
Update soon! xx
7/14/2012 c51 Randomly Obsessed
I'm really glad that you added that part back in. Your writing is amazing so keep it up! Don't make is suffer too long. :)
I'm really glad that you added that part back in. Your writing is amazing so keep it up! Don't make is suffer too long. :)