for Blood Rose6/10/2012 c1 
7LovelySocks
Woah. Very deep and somehow haunting as well. We never learn the character's name, or anything about them really. But it still sticks with me, and the fact we don't know who the character is at all makes it all the more intriguing. The writing is fantastic, and there's fantastic use of adjectives and metaphors. I could really see what was happening as it did. Great job!
7LovelySocksWoah. Very deep and somehow haunting as well. We never learn the character's name, or anything about them really. But it still sticks with me, and the fact we don't know who the character is at all makes it all the more intriguing. The writing is fantastic, and there's fantastic use of adjectives and metaphors. I could really see what was happening as it did. Great job!
11/23/2011 c1 9TheActualKarly
What happened in reading that made you write this? Anyway, great use of a simile and symbolism. Once again, don't write in the summary that it could be better or that you were just writing out emotions it kind of makes it unappealing to the reader.
9TheActualKarlyWhat happened in reading that made you write this? Anyway, great use of a simile and symbolism. Once again, don't write in the summary that it could be better or that you were just writing out emotions it kind of makes it unappealing to the reader.