for Words Don't Define Me6/10/2012 c1 
7LovelySocks
I found this poem paticuarly inspiring and quite powerful. It sends a great message, one that a lot of people hear but often ignore. The ending is perfect, leaving the reader something to ponder. Great job with the pattern of asking a question, then answering it. My favorite lines would have to be "Because your words don't define me. My actions and friendships speak loud." Wonderfully done :)
7LovelySocksI found this poem paticuarly inspiring and quite powerful. It sends a great message, one that a lot of people hear but often ignore. The ending is perfect, leaving the reader something to ponder. Great job with the pattern of asking a question, then answering it. My favorite lines would have to be "Because your words don't define me. My actions and friendships speak loud." Wonderfully done :)
11/23/2011 c1 9TheActualKarly
That was incredible. I just want to give you a hug and you know how much I despise physical contact. The only thing I would have added (it wouldn't have fit the emotion of the poem)is:
Do you think when you beat me up it hurts?
It does but,
you better watch out for my friends and their knives.
9TheActualKarlyThat was incredible. I just want to give you a hug and you know how much I despise physical contact. The only thing I would have added (it wouldn't have fit the emotion of the poem)is:
Do you think when you beat me up it hurts?
It does but,
you better watch out for my friends and their knives.