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11/2/2012 c1 2Redz
Wow, it's great. There was a moment in my life when I felt like this, too.

"It is because you are living that kills me inside" - the grammar is a bit wonky. Should be something like "It is because you are living that I die inside" or "the fact that you're living kills me inside." Don't know if you did it on purpose or not (it flows really well your way) but in case you didn't...

Anyway, this poem was awesome. It conveys the feeling so well. Definitely one of your best. Keep on writing!
10/8/2012 c1 3AoideMythos
Woah, that was pretty deep...You're great at poetry! I can't really do something as extreme as that! :-)
10/2/2012 c1 11cool sapc
Wow... That's all I can really say. Wow.
It says so much with so little.
11/30/2011 c1 Cherry Blossom Slushy
This poem sounds as though it is about a guy. And it has a nice flow. My favorite line was, "It's because it was yours, that I want to keep the ember."

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