for Don't Touch Me!5/2/2021 c1 HeyCharles
Please publish your work on NovelStar. For sure a lot of readers will love your work. There are also a lot of talented writers in the platform that you might want to work with.
Please publish your work on NovelStar. For sure a lot of readers will love your work. There are also a lot of talented writers in the platform that you might want to work with.
12/5/2018 c1 Ella
This is really good so far!
Keep going, I really like it! ;)
This is really good so far!
Keep going, I really like it! ;)
3/22/2016 c1 
2LostCriesofTime
I love this but just have one question... if shes supposed to be poor, why does she have $5000 and how can they afford chocolate syrup and pancakes? By poor is it supposed to mean not super rich? As I can tell that there's a massive discrepancy between them, but from this chapter's description I would in no way label her as poor. I just wondered, thats all.
The characters are great in this, I can't wait to see how Mr. $5000 alarm clock takes to her! :D
2LostCriesofTimeI love this but just have one question... if shes supposed to be poor, why does she have $5000 and how can they afford chocolate syrup and pancakes? By poor is it supposed to mean not super rich? As I can tell that there's a massive discrepancy between them, but from this chapter's description I would in no way label her as poor. I just wondered, thats all.
The characters are great in this, I can't wait to see how Mr. $5000 alarm clock takes to her! :D
10/14/2014 c16 annayh44
Oh my god...actually i would say it was just sweet candy melting in my mouth while reading the last part...waah Perfect Romeo and Juliet...I love love haha...new changes? Really? I think it complete..i hope nothing will go wrong with Rane and Misty if so...i will brust in tears..hehe..
Oh my god...actually i would say it was just sweet candy melting in my mouth while reading the last part...waah Perfect Romeo and Juliet...I love love haha...new changes? Really? I think it complete..i hope nothing will go wrong with Rane and Misty if so...i will brust in tears..hehe..
10/14/2014 c8 annayh44
Oooooh so sweeeet Rane...i didnt knew he so innocent knowing nothing about even christmas tree...hehe Now irritating guy is change to good one...seem falling for commoner Princess kkkkk I just dont get it why title is Dont Touch me...hmmm is not allowed to touch...stupid guess ..lets start reading again...nowwwwwwwwwww hahaha
Oooooh so sweeeet Rane...i didnt knew he so innocent knowing nothing about even christmas tree...hehe Now irritating guy is change to good one...seem falling for commoner Princess kkkkk I just dont get it why title is Dont Touch me...hmmm is not allowed to touch...stupid guess ..lets start reading again...nowwwwwwwwwww hahaha
10/14/2014 c3 annayh44
Haha I do feel special..Gomawo(thank you) kekeke...its getting ineresting more...but really this guy is kinda irritating but i like xD
Haha I do feel special..Gomawo(thank you) kekeke...its getting ineresting more...but really this guy is kinda irritating but i like xD
11/28/2012 c15 Guest
lovely. very harry potter-esqe with the marriages and kids.
lovely. very harry potter-esqe with the marriages and kids.
11/28/2012 c14 Guest
Wow, I love teh chapter titles!
Wow, I love teh chapter titles!
11/28/2012 c10 Guest
Awesome character development. You have quite a voice for someone so young!
Awesome character development. You have quite a voice for someone so young!
5/20/2012 c15 2MissColly
I just couldnt stop reading this story and when i finished, i got the same feeling i got when i finished reading the harry potter novels!
There was so many cute and sweet moments in this story! I absolutely loved it so much and I wished it had been longer. You are an amazing writer and this story was just so perfect and it made my day. Thank you so much for writing this! :)
2MissCollyI just couldnt stop reading this story and when i finished, i got the same feeling i got when i finished reading the harry potter novels!
There was so many cute and sweet moments in this story! I absolutely loved it so much and I wished it had been longer. You are an amazing writer and this story was just so perfect and it made my day. Thank you so much for writing this! :)
4/7/2012 c15 luv2read1999
there are no words that can describe my feelings for this story...sooooooooo before i write a 10,000 word review about this i should control myself and just say three words instead...I LOVE IT~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ (^.^)
there are no words that can describe my feelings for this story...sooooooooo before i write a 10,000 word review about this i should control myself and just say three words instead...I LOVE IT~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ (^.^)
2/25/2012 c15 Carson's-girl
I love your stories. I was intending to review the chapters individually, but just couldn't stop reading. Before I praise your story, as is inevitable, I have one criticism. You should proof read your work a couple of times, I noticed that there were several spelling mistakes, but thats just me!
I loved the context of the story, a lovely alternative star-crossed lovers tale. The characters were perfect, and I have to say, I would marry Rane! He's just amazing! You have a beautiful penmanship. How old are you? You seem to write at such an advanced level. I can't wait to read another of your stories. Would you write another romance story, I love the way you have the characters interact and have an unusual personal relationship with each other.
The subplot to the story was wonderful, too. What an interesting interpretation of a screwed up family! No-one seems to tackle the weird family issues.
I love your stories. I was intending to review the chapters individually, but just couldn't stop reading. Before I praise your story, as is inevitable, I have one criticism. You should proof read your work a couple of times, I noticed that there were several spelling mistakes, but thats just me!
I loved the context of the story, a lovely alternative star-crossed lovers tale. The characters were perfect, and I have to say, I would marry Rane! He's just amazing! You have a beautiful penmanship. How old are you? You seem to write at such an advanced level. I can't wait to read another of your stories. Would you write another romance story, I love the way you have the characters interact and have an unusual personal relationship with each other.
The subplot to the story was wonderful, too. What an interesting interpretation of a screwed up family! No-one seems to tackle the weird family issues.