for Personal Assistant or Personal Anguish?9/22/2012 c13 sneaky-fox
People start REVIEWING for God's sake!
I loved how much we got to know about Everett as a person in this chapter. Max seems to finally get that he actually is interested... poor guy she really doesn't make it easy for him.
As always I can't wait for the next chapter (and hopefully that trip upstate) :)
People start REVIEWING for God's sake!
I loved how much we got to know about Everett as a person in this chapter. Max seems to finally get that he actually is interested... poor guy she really doesn't make it easy for him.
As always I can't wait for the next chapter (and hopefully that trip upstate) :)
9/22/2012 c13 heal me forever
wow dis was FUN chapter is cool ;) i kind of crushing him ha ha! lol so ya update soon cant wait to know wat will be dey dng nxt SATURDAY ;) ;) *WOOT*
wow dis was FUN chapter is cool ;) i kind of crushing him ha ha! lol so ya update soon cant wait to know wat will be dey dng nxt SATURDAY ;) ;) *WOOT*
9/21/2012 c12 
1funnechick
I absolutely loved this chapter! It was so awesome to read from Everett's POV. And he seems to be infatuated with Maxima. It's quite cute and entertaining, haha. I'm enjoying it.
I don't know how it happened, but I'm just now reading chapter 11 as well and I can't believe Jada has been cheating on him, especially for so long. I hope she gets fully out of the picture.
And I know it'll be interesting when Everett and Maxima start working on his brother's case. I wonder if Wade will be able to tell how Everett feels about her?
1funnechickI absolutely loved this chapter! It was so awesome to read from Everett's POV. And he seems to be infatuated with Maxima. It's quite cute and entertaining, haha. I'm enjoying it.
I don't know how it happened, but I'm just now reading chapter 11 as well and I can't believe Jada has been cheating on him, especially for so long. I hope she gets fully out of the picture.
And I know it'll be interesting when Everett and Maxima start working on his brother's case. I wonder if Wade will be able to tell how Everett feels about her?
9/21/2012 c12 mylittleprincess
update fast, i love this story so much.
update fast, i love this story so much.
9/21/2012 c12 sneaky-fox
Thank you sooo much for the early update! I completely missed out on some of my lecture but let's face it this story is a 1000x more interesting that business strategy! :)
I like Everett more and more for every chapter. I felt bad for him being so fascinated by Max and she seemed so unaffected... Though I'm pretty sure she wasn't quite as cool as she seemed.
Now I should probably return my focus to my lecture ;)
Thank you sooo much for the early update! I completely missed out on some of my lecture but let's face it this story is a 1000x more interesting that business strategy! :)
I like Everett more and more for every chapter. I felt bad for him being so fascinated by Max and she seemed so unaffected... Though I'm pretty sure she wasn't quite as cool as she seemed.
Now I should probably return my focus to my lecture ;)
9/20/2012 c12 heal me forever
dis is awesum chapter...its cool he is super cute ..;) update soon..cant wait for d LUNCH :P
dis is awesum chapter...its cool he is super cute ..;) update soon..cant wait for d LUNCH :P
9/20/2012 c11 sneaky-fox
You are back! Thank God! I was afraid you were going to pull a "Darkness Run" on me ;)
No in all seriousness I am really glad you decided to continue this story, I read chapter 10 on the day you posted it but my phone wouldn't let me review it. Both chapter 10 and 11 are really great developments of the story. I was expecting some Everett/Max action at the party in chapter 10 but as always you surprise and gave us a much more intimate scene with Everett opening up to her in this chapter.
How bad do I want the next chapter? enough that I have been checking my mail more than 8 times a day :)
You are back! Thank God! I was afraid you were going to pull a "Darkness Run" on me ;)
No in all seriousness I am really glad you decided to continue this story, I read chapter 10 on the day you posted it but my phone wouldn't let me review it. Both chapter 10 and 11 are really great developments of the story. I was expecting some Everett/Max action at the party in chapter 10 but as always you surprise and gave us a much more intimate scene with Everett opening up to her in this chapter.
How bad do I want the next chapter? enough that I have been checking my mail more than 8 times a day :)
9/17/2012 c11 NHira
I love this story. I bookmarked it to my phone and I check this thing like every week to see if there's another chapter added. Whoo! Keep up the excellente work!
I love this story. I bookmarked it to my phone and I check this thing like every week to see if there's another chapter added. Whoo! Keep up the excellente work!
9/17/2012 c11 4Pascale Kowai KV
I definitely had some replies about Jada in this chapter! :)
I had two big surprises in this chapter: Jada cheating on Everett and Wade being a dad! I really like that kind of plot twists as long as it doesn't look like a deus ex machina in the middle of a story! It gives all the taste to it.
Also, the cover looks quite nice.
4Pascale Kowai KVI definitely had some replies about Jada in this chapter! :)
I had two big surprises in this chapter: Jada cheating on Everett and Wade being a dad! I really like that kind of plot twists as long as it doesn't look like a deus ex machina in the middle of a story! It gives all the taste to it.
Also, the cover looks quite nice.
9/17/2012 c11 mylittleprincess
love it ,update soon.
love it ,update soon.
9/17/2012 c11 heal me forever
d cover looks fab ;)
stry is gng on BANG ON pase..i am liking /loving it :)
of course i am like eager to see his POV update soon ..!
d cover looks fab ;)
stry is gng on BANG ON pase..i am liking /loving it :)
of course i am like eager to see his POV update soon ..!
9/16/2012 c11 w3ardo
i like the cover, was it there last update?
and id never think that these two would ever get so friendly
i like the cover, was it there last update?
and id never think that these two would ever get so friendly
9/16/2012 c11 BoopdeBoop
Good chapter overall, a little short but still very satisfying. Can't wait for updates! :)
Good chapter overall, a little short but still very satisfying. Can't wait for updates! :)
9/16/2012 c10 Pascale Kowai KV
I just discovered this story and it seems quite interesting so far! It took me a while to catch up with all the chapters! I like that.
The only think that is bugging me is the place you give to Jada; maybe it is just me but for a person that is so near one of the main characters, she's been more like a 3rd level character up until now but we know it's bound to happen that she's gonna have e lot of weight in the evolution of Everett and Maxima's relationship. I'm sure this could have be solved by giving a few more informations about her in the previous chapters. :)
I'm looking forward to what you may write next! The apparition of Wade seems like a signal of a big turn! I'm just making theories now though! P
I just discovered this story and it seems quite interesting so far! It took me a while to catch up with all the chapters! I like that.
The only think that is bugging me is the place you give to Jada; maybe it is just me but for a person that is so near one of the main characters, she's been more like a 3rd level character up until now but we know it's bound to happen that she's gonna have e lot of weight in the evolution of Everett and Maxima's relationship. I'm sure this could have be solved by giving a few more informations about her in the previous chapters. :)
I'm looking forward to what you may write next! The apparition of Wade seems like a signal of a big turn! I'm just making theories now though! P
9/15/2012 c10 1starlight91
Yes, please keep going :) Wade seems to be an interesting character. And yes, it has been a loooong time! Haha, but I've been waiting nonetheless. Keep up the good work!
1starlight91Yes, please keep going :) Wade seems to be an interesting character. And yes, it has been a loooong time! Haha, but I've been waiting nonetheless. Keep up the good work!