for End Point8/4/2014 c1 Guest
There is a fan fiction literally word for word of this story but with switched names. Gakuen alice. It is .
There is a fan fiction literally word for word of this story but with switched names. Gakuen alice. It is .
7/6/2014 c21 Nance
Great Great story. I couldn't stop reading until I finished it.
Thanks!
Great Great story. I couldn't stop reading until I finished it.
Thanks!
7/6/2014 c6 Nance
Love this story! Can hardly wait to read each chapter.
Very well written.
Thank you.
Love this story! Can hardly wait to read each chapter.
Very well written.
Thank you.
4/13/2014 c20 Guest
So I read this story a few weeks ago and I wanted to read it again but I couldn't find it anywhere! It was literally driving me crazy because it was one ofy favorite stories but I could remember anyone's names besides Ash. Anyways, I remember the scene when Ellis is driving because she needed to feel in control. So in Google I typed in, 'he stared at her wondering when she got so strong fictionpress' A lot of shit popped up and on fan fiction your story END POINT came up. At first I thought someone plagiarized your story but then I realized their story was published first. And you copied. So I was like wanting to tell you that someone stole your story but the not wanting to tell you because I loved it and I didn't want you to take it down. But I was so thankful to read your authors note saying that it was you who wrote that story also lol this is a long review but anyways I love the story and I think you are a very good writer. People reviewing keep saying there were a few mistakes but who gives a shit, all together, it was amazing.
So I read this story a few weeks ago and I wanted to read it again but I couldn't find it anywhere! It was literally driving me crazy because it was one ofy favorite stories but I could remember anyone's names besides Ash. Anyways, I remember the scene when Ellis is driving because she needed to feel in control. So in Google I typed in, 'he stared at her wondering when she got so strong fictionpress' A lot of shit popped up and on fan fiction your story END POINT came up. At first I thought someone plagiarized your story but then I realized their story was published first. And you copied. So I was like wanting to tell you that someone stole your story but the not wanting to tell you because I loved it and I didn't want you to take it down. But I was so thankful to read your authors note saying that it was you who wrote that story also lol this is a long review but anyways I love the story and I think you are a very good writer. People reviewing keep saying there were a few mistakes but who gives a shit, all together, it was amazing.
3/1/2014 c6 Guest
Great story! Keep up the good work!
Great story! Keep up the good work!
2/18/2014 c21 Abbey
This was such an enjoyable read! I was planning to read only a couple of chapters at a time, but I just couldn't stop (well, I only stopped when I had classes to attend, haha).
The pacing was a bit too fast for my taste (although this could be due to me quickly going to the next chapter), but I like how everything was resolved. I'm really glad that Ash is in a relationship. It'd be heartbreaking if he stayed in love with Ellis. And that conversation in the epilogue was adorable!
This was such an enjoyable read! I was planning to read only a couple of chapters at a time, but I just couldn't stop (well, I only stopped when I had classes to attend, haha).
The pacing was a bit too fast for my taste (although this could be due to me quickly going to the next chapter), but I like how everything was resolved. I'm really glad that Ash is in a relationship. It'd be heartbreaking if he stayed in love with Ellis. And that conversation in the epilogue was adorable!
2/16/2014 c21 belle
Ash really pulled at my heart strings, dare I hope for his story...happy ending of course...he deserves it, also Vince.
Ash really pulled at my heart strings, dare I hope for his story...happy ending of course...he deserves it, also Vince.
8/12/2012 c20 Guest
You are a wonderful writer you should be published I will by your books.
You are a wonderful writer you should be published I will by your books.
6/7/2012 c20 the girl with no log in
I loved this!
I would have reviewed each chapter individually but i was totally engrossed and didn't want to stop reading.
I love how you didn't have Ellis bounce back to being the same as she was prior to her kidnapping yet she wasn't a total hopeless case.
I loved the way you had Adam and Ash learn to deal with her vulnerable yet stubborn and quite independent state.
I liked the way the other members of the team kind of rallied around and took up protective roles from a distance - this helped to keep it realistic in terms of her still have trouble letting people in.
To put it simply... I LOVED IT!
I loved this!
I would have reviewed each chapter individually but i was totally engrossed and didn't want to stop reading.
I love how you didn't have Ellis bounce back to being the same as she was prior to her kidnapping yet she wasn't a total hopeless case.
I loved the way you had Adam and Ash learn to deal with her vulnerable yet stubborn and quite independent state.
I liked the way the other members of the team kind of rallied around and took up protective roles from a distance - this helped to keep it realistic in terms of her still have trouble letting people in.
To put it simply... I LOVED IT!
5/21/2012 c20 
14drizzelafterdawn
okay finally read the piece off. be true it could have been more exciting and interesting with a great deal of action. the drama was too much drama i guess and frankly your story started off with a really high point but lost that element in the end. i know my review is late and too much saying after reading bits of the chapter so ill sum it up. i like your vocabulary and that element of interest you kept, although it got drained in the end. i have no intention to accuse you or anything,so nice story :)
14drizzelafterdawnokay finally read the piece off. be true it could have been more exciting and interesting with a great deal of action. the drama was too much drama i guess and frankly your story started off with a really high point but lost that element in the end. i know my review is late and too much saying after reading bits of the chapter so ill sum it up. i like your vocabulary and that element of interest you kept, although it got drained in the end. i have no intention to accuse you or anything,so nice story :)
2/28/2012 c20 Rena
Amazing story! I love it!
Amazing story! I love it!
2/24/2012 c1 Jabberwacky
This is good, but I'm a little confused as to why she hates him if he's the one who saved her life.
This is good, but I'm a little confused as to why she hates him if he's the one who saved her life.
2/21/2012 c20 use.less.woman
Great job! Great finish! I love that Ellis handled herself. I love that they got a happily ever after ending. and I love that Ash moved on and is happy. I love what you have done here. This is an awesome story.
Great job! Great finish! I love that Ellis handled herself. I love that they got a happily ever after ending. and I love that Ash moved on and is happy. I love what you have done here. This is an awesome story.
2/20/2012 c1 NYR
On FictionPress, I've seen the name Ellis being used as a Girl's name more often than a guy's. (snicker)
On FictionPress, I've seen the name Ellis being used as a Girl's name more often than a guy's. (snicker)