for Courting Chaos9/2/2012 c5 Jodes101
Picked up a little mistake that spell check would have missed - one more than one occasion.
Falling in love with Aaron.
Picked up a little mistake that spell check would have missed - one more than one occasion.
Falling in love with Aaron.
9/2/2012 c4 Jodes101
I don't know why your not happy with it, I thought it gave a nice insight to some of the family dynamics. I do have to ask though - do Americans really go to the lobby for breakfast in their pyjamas?
I don't know why your not happy with it, I thought it gave a nice insight to some of the family dynamics. I do have to ask though - do Americans really go to the lobby for breakfast in their pyjamas?
9/2/2012 c3 Jodes101
So nice to read a story where the dislike between the two characters is not over the top. Great music on the CD.
So nice to read a story where the dislike between the two characters is not over the top. Great music on the CD.
9/2/2012 c2 Jodes101
Although it is like you say a fairly cliche story you have added enough interesting characters and story lines to create something new and refreshing. I love Tyler.
The story has a nice flow and good character development without the overload of information and characters that I have been seeing in a lot of writing lately. I really enjoy your style of writing.
Although it is like you say a fairly cliche story you have added enough interesting characters and story lines to create something new and refreshing. I love Tyler.
The story has a nice flow and good character development without the overload of information and characters that I have been seeing in a lot of writing lately. I really enjoy your style of writing.
8/27/2012 c1 
1blackbirds fly
This is one of those stories where you read the summary and you're like 'this is going to be a crazy story.' But when you read it, it's crazy in a realistic way that draws the reader in. Every single character was believable, real, and had a heart. You would think that Sam's family would be a little whack and that they wouldn't get along, but it was nice to see that they loved each other. Sam's mom made me laugh, and I developed a soft spot for Tyler. Nora and Jake had good intentions. And Aaron was my favorite, and his interactions with Sam and her family were heartwarming. Overall it had that cliched undertone to it (which I love), but it was astoundingly original (for the obvious reasons.) Your writing is phenomenal and good luck with the SKoW awards!
1blackbirds flyThis is one of those stories where you read the summary and you're like 'this is going to be a crazy story.' But when you read it, it's crazy in a realistic way that draws the reader in. Every single character was believable, real, and had a heart. You would think that Sam's family would be a little whack and that they wouldn't get along, but it was nice to see that they loved each other. Sam's mom made me laugh, and I developed a soft spot for Tyler. Nora and Jake had good intentions. And Aaron was my favorite, and his interactions with Sam and her family were heartwarming. Overall it had that cliched undertone to it (which I love), but it was astoundingly original (for the obvious reasons.) Your writing is phenomenal and good luck with the SKoW awards!
8/24/2012 c15 13youngin-matomon
Normally, I dislike wedding scenes because they're so often unreal and romantic and so VERY 'happy ending'. But this. Was PERFECT.
Also, Aaron and Sam are just adorable.
13youngin-matomonNormally, I dislike wedding scenes because they're so often unreal and romantic and so VERY 'happy ending'. But this. Was PERFECT.
Also, Aaron and Sam are just adorable.
8/24/2012 c12 youngin-matomon
Okay, although I did somehow think that Aaron knew about Jake I didn't think that he KNEW about Jake. I just thought he knew snippets about it and he assumed the rest or something.
Crap! That was a good twist!
Okay, although I did somehow think that Aaron knew about Jake I didn't think that he KNEW about Jake. I just thought he knew snippets about it and he assumed the rest or something.
Crap! That was a good twist!
8/24/2012 c11 youngin-matomon
Well.
That was certainly a twist.
And so, you have successfully managed to make this non-chick-flick-y.
Well.
That was certainly a twist.
And so, you have successfully managed to make this non-chick-flick-y.
8/24/2012 c8 youngin-matomon
STRANGELY, STRANGELY ENOUGH...I...I don't hate Nora and Jake. In fact, I think how they started dating was really... romantic. And sweet.
I have mixed feels actually.
STRANGELY, STRANGELY ENOUGH...I...I don't hate Nora and Jake. In fact, I think how they started dating was really... romantic. And sweet.
I have mixed feels actually.
8/24/2012 c15 1Ceri Anne
I loved this, and the ending was so sweet! I want me an Aaron please :) and Tyler really made me smile. He must be the best brother ever. There were a couple of spelling mistakes here and there but certainly nothing that stood out too much. I'm off to read some more of your work now
1Ceri AnneI loved this, and the ending was so sweet! I want me an Aaron please :) and Tyler really made me smile. He must be the best brother ever. There were a couple of spelling mistakes here and there but certainly nothing that stood out too much. I'm off to read some more of your work now
8/23/2012 c2 sappyromancelvr
hehe. Cliche stories are some of the best things because it takes us away from reality when we need it most. :)
hehe. Cliche stories are some of the best things because it takes us away from reality when we need it most. :)
8/23/2012 c2 13youngin-matomon
I wonder why Sam doesn't hate her parents for being okay with her YOUNGER SISTER getting married to the man SHE was supposed to marry.
13youngin-matomonI wonder why Sam doesn't hate her parents for being okay with her YOUNGER SISTER getting married to the man SHE was supposed to marry.