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4/18/2015 c5 AllTheWayUp12
Holy shit.
Okay, pardon my manners but, holy shit, you finally updated.
Okay, so as for what I think, as I said before, I like Anna. I think she's good for Tristan right now. She's great. But still, I can't believe I'm saying this even though Roxy's being an unreasonably grade A bitch and all, but I think she and Tristan is still endgame.
Honestly, I hate how she's becoming. Reading from Tristan's point of view, I feel as if as of right now, there is no way of him falling back to her. Especially with Anna around. And she has no self-awareness whatsoever. I get a better read of her way of thinking better from Tristan's POV rather than her own. And I don't understand why.
Why is she acting like this, henbee? WHY? Tristan himself said that she is not the girl he fell in love with. Not that I'm saying she should be the way she used to be, but I feel like instead of becoming maturer than how she was when she was trying to support her siblings, the opposite happened.
The way the story's going, I'm deathly afraid of hating Roxy, who I loved in DYTLM, and love Anna instead. Please, oh please, can I slap some sese into her? I don't want to hate her. I especially don't want Tristan to hate her. When he describes her as a psycho, or a bitch, or a pyscho bitch, it hurts a little bit, you know?
Oh, and as for Ronnie, her obsession is a little bit overthetop. Or maybe I just don't understand because my fangirling has never reached that high. But I'm sure she has an important role to play, though I'm not sure if it would be a good role so i can't say i'm excited for it.
Oh, and I certainly hope things start to pick up soon...
And that you update sooner.
I swear I have been waiting for your update for ages. (My heart leaps whenever I check my mail to see that you've updated.)
Oh jeez, please set me free of the anxiety this story has been causing me.
Will wait for you next update always,
AllTheWayUp12
Ps it seems i can't post it because FP thinks I've already reviewed, but I'm pretty sire I was the last one to review the previous chapter, jsyk, if you wanted to reply to my review if ever. Lol.
Holy shit.
Okay, pardon my manners but, holy shit, you finally updated.
Okay, so as for what I think, as I said before, I like Anna. I think she's good for Tristan right now. She's great. But still, I can't believe I'm saying this even though Roxy's being an unreasonably grade A bitch and all, but I think she and Tristan is still endgame.
Honestly, I hate how she's becoming. Reading from Tristan's point of view, I feel as if as of right now, there is no way of him falling back to her. Especially with Anna around. And she has no self-awareness whatsoever. I get a better read of her way of thinking better from Tristan's POV rather than her own. And I don't understand why.
Why is she acting like this, henbee? WHY? Tristan himself said that she is not the girl he fell in love with. Not that I'm saying she should be the way she used to be, but I feel like instead of becoming maturer than how she was when she was trying to support her siblings, the opposite happened.
The way the story's going, I'm deathly afraid of hating Roxy, who I loved in DYTLM, and love Anna instead. Please, oh please, can I slap some sese into her? I don't want to hate her. I especially don't want Tristan to hate her. When he describes her as a psycho, or a bitch, or a pyscho bitch, it hurts a little bit, you know?
Oh, and as for Ronnie, her obsession is a little bit overthetop. Or maybe I just don't understand because my fangirling has never reached that high. But I'm sure she has an important role to play, though I'm not sure if it would be a good role so i can't say i'm excited for it.
Oh, and I certainly hope things start to pick up soon...
And that you update sooner.
I swear I have been waiting for your update for ages. (My heart leaps whenever I check my mail to see that you've updated.)
Oh jeez, please set me free of the anxiety this story has been causing me.
Will wait for you next update always,
AllTheWayUp12
Ps it seems i can't post it because FP thinks I've already reviewed, but I'm pretty sire I was the last one to review the previous chapter, jsyk, if you wanted to reply to my review if ever. Lol.
11/23/2014 c4 AllTheWayUp12
Oh. My. Gosh.
Finally. FINALLY. You have no idea how long I've been waiting for an update. Thank you soooo much.
So anyways, I really hoped that Adam and Tristan would be okay by now, but I guess that was wishful thinking.. Also, the heck is up with Roxy?! Inviting Tristan like that after she wanted him out of the picture? I mean, really? Everything is just so messed up. It's like everything - all the progress and character development - from the past story has just been nonexistent somehow. I mean, it's not nonexistent, but... Ugh. I just hate how everyone's in a bad place. But I guess, this is still the start, so I'm excited to see where you'll go from here.
On a side note, I like Anna. She's cool.
UPDAT SOON PLEASE. PLEASE. PLEAAASE.
Oh. My. Gosh.
Finally. FINALLY. You have no idea how long I've been waiting for an update. Thank you soooo much.
So anyways, I really hoped that Adam and Tristan would be okay by now, but I guess that was wishful thinking.. Also, the heck is up with Roxy?! Inviting Tristan like that after she wanted him out of the picture? I mean, really? Everything is just so messed up. It's like everything - all the progress and character development - from the past story has just been nonexistent somehow. I mean, it's not nonexistent, but... Ugh. I just hate how everyone's in a bad place. But I guess, this is still the start, so I'm excited to see where you'll go from here.
On a side note, I like Anna. She's cool.
UPDAT SOON PLEASE. PLEASE. PLEAAASE.
11/22/2014 c4 
2the.lost.scribe
YOU UPDATED! You finally updated! I was definitely not expecting the Anna thing though but I was really hoping for something like that to happen. I just didn't realize they were already together. But anyways, I'm really looking forward to reading the next chapter and seeing what'll happen in Colorado. Great chapter. Please update soon! :)
2the.lost.scribeYOU UPDATED! You finally updated! I was definitely not expecting the Anna thing though but I was really hoping for something like that to happen. I just didn't realize they were already together. But anyways, I'm really looking forward to reading the next chapter and seeing what'll happen in Colorado. Great chapter. Please update soon! :)
5/26/2014 c3 mimster259
Wow, I'm so tired right now! I just finished the last story and this part it a little more than a weekend! And I gotta say this is pretty great! Just, I can't even begin to describe how awesome this is!
Update! Update! I know you haven't in almost a year, but it's so good! And hey! You said in the last chapter that this was your "priority story" and that you'd "promise that you wouldn't abandon this story for months on end."...sorry...I got a little sassy. But it's so good, and I'm not very patient at really terrific story's updates!
Wow, I'm so tired right now! I just finished the last story and this part it a little more than a weekend! And I gotta say this is pretty great! Just, I can't even begin to describe how awesome this is!
Update! Update! I know you haven't in almost a year, but it's so good! And hey! You said in the last chapter that this was your "priority story" and that you'd "promise that you wouldn't abandon this story for months on end."...sorry...I got a little sassy. But it's so good, and I'm not very patient at really terrific story's updates!
4/10/2014 c3 8RawrRawr227
O.o YOU CAN'T GET ME HOOKED ON A STORY AND STOP WRITING IT! THAT SHOULD BE ILLEGAL! MORE CHAPTERS MOREEEEEEEEE! Loved the story by the way may I steal Tristan? u - Mari
8RawrRawr227O.o YOU CAN'T GET ME HOOKED ON A STORY AND STOP WRITING IT! THAT SHOULD BE ILLEGAL! MORE CHAPTERS MOREEEEEEEEE! Loved the story by the way may I steal Tristan? u - Mari
3/13/2014 c3 Guest
hi henbee, i really love this story of yours , well actually i really love all your writing esp my only direction. i noticed you haven't updated this in like six months so please do and who is the faceclaim for roxy?
hi henbee, i really love this story of yours , well actually i really love all your writing esp my only direction. i noticed you haven't updated this in like six months so please do and who is the faceclaim for roxy?
1/24/2014 c3 Guest
WHAT HAPPENED TO NOT ABANDONING THIS STORY FIR MONTHS END AGAIN?! Update pleaaaase :(
WHAT HAPPENED TO NOT ABANDONING THIS STORY FIR MONTHS END AGAIN?! Update pleaaaase :(
7/20/2013 c3 the.lost.scribe
Can I just say how much I love Tristan right now? I mean, I love how he's starting to act like himself again (pre-Roxy Tristan, I mean) and that he isn't catering to all of Roxy's whims and desires anymore. Whatever happened to Tommy though? I'm honestly curious as to how Tristan found out about Natasha's accident when he was with Tommy and his phone was turned off.
Anyway, I can't wait for the next update and please, please update soon. I'm so looking forward to the next chapter so yeah. Please update soon :D
Can I just say how much I love Tristan right now? I mean, I love how he's starting to act like himself again (pre-Roxy Tristan, I mean) and that he isn't catering to all of Roxy's whims and desires anymore. Whatever happened to Tommy though? I'm honestly curious as to how Tristan found out about Natasha's accident when he was with Tommy and his phone was turned off.
Anyway, I can't wait for the next update and please, please update soon. I'm so looking forward to the next chapter so yeah. Please update soon :D
7/11/2013 c3 Guest
I love this series! Tristan is back! I cant wait to see what happens next?...Team Tristan and Roxy for the win!
I love this series! Tristan is back! I cant wait to see what happens next?...Team Tristan and Roxy for the win!
7/5/2013 c3 AllTheWayUp12
Hiiii! :)
Thank you soooo much for updating! I hope your exams went well, and I hope your wrist will be fine too. The length of this justifies the long absence, but it's not stopping us from wanting more. HAHAHAH!
Lee is cute. And thank God Tristan and Addie are patching things up. Yaaay! I'd just be repeating my other reviews if I voice out how much I love this story and the characters and you for writing it, so yeahh... Can't wait for the next chapter! UPDATE SOON!
Much love from mee :)
Hiiii! :)
Thank you soooo much for updating! I hope your exams went well, and I hope your wrist will be fine too. The length of this justifies the long absence, but it's not stopping us from wanting more. HAHAHAH!
Lee is cute. And thank God Tristan and Addie are patching things up. Yaaay! I'd just be repeating my other reviews if I voice out how much I love this story and the characters and you for writing it, so yeahh... Can't wait for the next chapter! UPDATE SOON!
Much love from mee :)
7/1/2013 c3 SomsCougli
SWEET JESUS, WHERE HAVE YOU BEEEEEEEEN?!
I hope your wrist is okay though. And I hope your exams went well. But we missed you! And I missed Roxy and Tristan of course... Kidding, just Tristan.
You better have your damn mojo back! If not, I have a cat named Mojo, and you can have him for a while if it'll help ;D
HAPPIES ALL 'ROUND! And yay for priorities!
And FictionPress thinks I've already reviewed this chapter o.O What even, Steven?
Anyhow!
Lovelovelovelovelove! xoxoxoxoxo
SWEET JESUS, WHERE HAVE YOU BEEEEEEEEN?!
I hope your wrist is okay though. And I hope your exams went well. But we missed you! And I missed Roxy and Tristan of course... Kidding, just Tristan.
You better have your damn mojo back! If not, I have a cat named Mojo, and you can have him for a while if it'll help ;D
HAPPIES ALL 'ROUND! And yay for priorities!
And FictionPress thinks I've already reviewed this chapter o.O What even, Steven?
Anyhow!
Lovelovelovelovelove! xoxoxoxoxo
7/1/2013 c3 c0leyy
LOL SO YOU BETTER LIKE.. IDK.. WRITE THIS MORE OFTEN INSTEAD OF EVERY 6 MONTHS! I DON'T KNOW WHETHER TO LAUGH OR CRY BECAUSE IT'S PERFECT I JUST LOVE TRISTAN AND ROXY AND OMFG SETH WAS MENTIONED AND I CRIED BC I MISS HIM MORE HANNAH THAT'S ALL I'M GOING TO SA BYE
LOL SO YOU BETTER LIKE.. IDK.. WRITE THIS MORE OFTEN INSTEAD OF EVERY 6 MONTHS! I DON'T KNOW WHETHER TO LAUGH OR CRY BECAUSE IT'S PERFECT I JUST LOVE TRISTAN AND ROXY AND OMFG SETH WAS MENTIONED AND I CRIED BC I MISS HIM MORE HANNAH THAT'S ALL I'M GOING TO SA BYE
6/30/2013 c3 Guest
AH! YES! I came on here on the off chance that you'd updated and you HAD!
I never come on here anymore and I remembered this story/series and asdfghljkkh
YES
love it.
AH! YES! I came on here on the off chance that you'd updated and you HAD!
I never come on here anymore and I remembered this story/series and asdfghljkkh
YES
love it.