for Hand Flies Free1/20/2013 c1 Iread
I hope this doesn't offend you but I was really hoping I'd find what you had written on the summary somewhere in this poem. The summary really caught me. Other than that it was a good poem.
I hope this doesn't offend you but I was really hoping I'd find what you had written on the summary somewhere in this poem. The summary really caught me. Other than that it was a good poem.
12/6/2012 c1 
67astral boy
I don't know if this was written from your personal experiences or not, but it touched something personal with me. It's such a sad thing. There is real anger and awareness of a transformation, which is quite despairing... despite that, it had a flowing rhythm that still made it enjoyable to keep reading.
Good to see you're still writing. :)
67astral boyI don't know if this was written from your personal experiences or not, but it touched something personal with me. It's such a sad thing. There is real anger and awareness of a transformation, which is quite despairing... despite that, it had a flowing rhythm that still made it enjoyable to keep reading.
Good to see you're still writing. :)
12/16/2011 c1 2Sheila Ibre
Epic! Really epic. I'd like to be more constructive - but sadly my sleep aid is taking effect and scrambling my brain cells as i types..
I see the transition from youth to adult, the passing from one hand to the next, the use of a mirror and from then onwards (my mind scrambles here)
real nice, real epic, would love to hear where this came from.
2Sheila IbreEpic! Really epic. I'd like to be more constructive - but sadly my sleep aid is taking effect and scrambling my brain cells as i types..
I see the transition from youth to adult, the passing from one hand to the next, the use of a mirror and from then onwards (my mind scrambles here)
real nice, real epic, would love to hear where this came from.