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1/20/2013 c1 Iread
I hope this doesn't offend you but I was really hoping I'd find what you had written on the summary somewhere in this poem. The summary really caught me. Other than that it was a good poem.
12/6/2012 c1 67astral boy
I don't know if this was written from your personal experiences or not, but it touched something personal with me. It's such a sad thing. There is real anger and awareness of a transformation, which is quite despairing... despite that, it had a flowing rhythm that still made it enjoyable to keep reading.

Good to see you're still writing. :)
12/16/2011 c1 2Sheila Ibre
Epic! Really epic. I'd like to be more constructive - but sadly my sleep aid is taking effect and scrambling my brain cells as i types..

I see the transition from youth to adult, the passing from one hand to the next, the use of a mirror and from then onwards (my mind scrambles here)

real nice, real epic, would love to hear where this came from.

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