for Oh Brother12/20/2011 c1 Jenny-A
Hey, nice story. I'm not the biggest smut reader but I felt that this was to 'action' based you tend to just say what happened without going into depth - anyhow that's just me.
The story and plot behind it is a pretty good start for a novel, although pregnancy not so much. Mainly because a broken condoms ( condoms will not break if you use them properly anyway) is not the end of the world ( morning after pill, etc.)
Anyhow, enough of my ranting. This was a nice read.
Hey, nice story. I'm not the biggest smut reader but I felt that this was to 'action' based you tend to just say what happened without going into depth - anyhow that's just me.
The story and plot behind it is a pretty good start for a novel, although pregnancy not so much. Mainly because a broken condoms ( condoms will not break if you use them properly anyway) is not the end of the world ( morning after pill, etc.)
Anyhow, enough of my ranting. This was a nice read.