for Mother of the Heir : Redux12/31/2012 c2 Auraya
LOVE IT :D
LOVE IT :D
12/31/2012 c2 
1ohhellothen
Hi- this is really good so far, but I just need to point something out because it's really bugging me. BCE means "before common era" meaning that 30 BCE means thirty years before common era. Therefore two years later would be 28 BCE. But again, it's all very well written; I just have pet peeves about dates and things...
1ohhellothenHi- this is really good so far, but I just need to point something out because it's really bugging me. BCE means "before common era" meaning that 30 BCE means thirty years before common era. Therefore two years later would be 28 BCE. But again, it's all very well written; I just have pet peeves about dates and things...
1/11/2012 c1 Moon Sage
Aha...whoa, Nefertari? xD I am intrigued and would like to see it continue. :D
Aha...whoa, Nefertari? xD I am intrigued and would like to see it continue. :D
12/21/2011 c1 8ChemicalHazzard
I am so looking forward for this story!
Just PLEASE, please please please, keep the updates regular
8ChemicalHazzardI am so looking forward for this story!
Just PLEASE, please please please, keep the updates regular
12/20/2011 c1 2toolongtolive
i love the tension created here. especially the cliffhanger.
can't wait to read more!
2toolongtolivei love the tension created here. especially the cliffhanger.
can't wait to read more!
12/20/2011 c1 Nebulad
Oh... that last little sentence made me sad o.o
Not only do they not see each other any more, but it implies her death. One measly chapter and I already liked her...
Oh... that last little sentence made me sad o.o
Not only do they not see each other any more, but it implies her death. One measly chapter and I already liked her...